Plastic Aside

A rhym I wrote in a moment of inspiration,, just blowing the dust out really, nothing more.

At anytime I can tell you
My trues eyes for true value
No lies,
no other motives in mind
Just lines from lines of true poetic views

Only truth
My inner most captive views
I can serve
No longer be reserved
Burn with truths I have found,
with a mouth that never sold out
Moo like a brown cow

You don't get it?
Work it out
 
Its all about who we are
Right here
Right now

"Hold on
Be strong
When its on, its on"   (2pac)

A love for life
A love for friendship
A love for freedom and a love for adventure

Walk with me
Adore life with me

Fight with me
See the sky with me

Plastic lives aside
See this night with me.

Reviews

[Shadows of Sight]

I liked this! I bet you've walked in some really beautiful and mystical places!

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Walk with me
Adore life with me
Fight with me
See the sky with me
Plastic lives aside
See this night with me.

I love the concept here...very excellent write! Good flow, perfect rhythm, almost like a song at the end. Love it!

[Brenda Sue]

I love the adventure of this piece. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

[Natasha Ashway]

I like the line 'With a mouth that never sold out'.
And you round it all up with this perfect last refrain:
Plastic lives aside
See this night with me.
I don't need to say anything more.

[Wulfstan Crumble]

Good dust off. Nice simple poem, not pretentious at all. Good work there. Not sure what plastic lives aside means but it could just be my tiredness.