I Quake In Your Hands

**EROTICA** Contains Graphic Language and Themes

Shaken
A*s stretched to its limit
Made to undress in the wilderness
The jewel shone
Its sapphire glimmered
The depth of blue
He regarded
Gazing upon His prey
Pleased
He chuckled
From deep within His psyche
And asked himself
how wrong would this be
how wrong would this look
how long could he
Wait
Until He Shook her.

He sunk His fingers deep within
Gasping for breath
she became rigid
arching her back towards
His chest
Her eyes would look to the sky
if they were open
Wave upon wave
of orgasm
Every word
Title
Taken
and bestowed again
Shake me, Sir.
I quake in your hands.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

To me, this conveys strong, ever-present sensual tones, yet it's not graphically sexual writing, a balance I prefer. I enjoy the way you combine irreverent elements like his anticipatory chuckling, which feels a little predatory, but it fits with your overall message & attitude. Your ability to write with a lack of inhibitions is my favorite part (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Carson Kramer]

Why thank you, Margie. I'm glad you enjoyed this. I try to be tasteful, so I'm happy you found it so.