Not Before I've Taken Mine

Not Before I've Taken Mine

A Poem by Carson Kramer
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**EROTICA** Contains Mature Subject Matter

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The Autumn morning air has your n*****s erect,
poking through the sheet as you sleep beside me.
The open window allows the crisp air to envelope our
bodies as I gaze upon your figure, your face, and your soon
to be awakened body.
I slide the sheet slowly from your breasts.
I trace my finger gently around your areola.
You stir, but not wake, with a deep, slow breath.
I touch the tip of my tongue to your n****e.
Barely touching, tickling.
You grab the sheet to recover your breasts
and I silently chuckle.
Again, I slowly slide the sheet down.
I purse my lips and gently blow cool breath
on your n****e.
You groan, and turn on your side,
grabbing the sheet, and pulling it over your shoulders.
I scoot closer to you.
Pressing my hardness against your a*s,
I trace my hands along the curves of the side of your body.
You slowly awaken, and press harder against me.
I grab your breasts and knead them together.
"Good morning, Daddy"
Good morning, Kitten.
I'm going to make you breakfast,
But not before I've taken mine.

© 2018 Carson Kramer


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I think you just put "IHOP" out of business. I'll have what she's having! ; )

Posted 5 Years Ago


Carson Kramer

5 Years Ago

:-D Thank you so much, Kelly! A little, When Harry Met Sally, reference, is always fun. ;)
Kelly Scheppers

5 Years Ago

Lol, most definitely!
This is a perfect little sexy vignette that does not have any crudeness to it at all. This, to my way of thinking, is erotica written for a female. Sure, there are females that like it down & dirty, but in appealing to a wider audience, I believe this really hits the bullseye. Your pacing is perfect, which is rare, & I crave for sexy writers to take their time getting to the goods! This is a beautifully-crafted playful traipse to the brink. I also love your sassy title/ending (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Carson Kramer

5 Years Ago

My dear Margie, I thank you. I suppose that yours is the kind of review that I may not have received.. read more
barleygirl

5 Years Ago

I thought you got rid of Nipplegrinder, but then I saw it here again recently. Please forgive me for.. read more
Carson Kramer

5 Years Ago

No worries, Margie. I will always keep Nipplegrinder. Carson Kramer, is more like an experiment. Tha.. read more

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Carson Kramer
Carson Kramer

St. Louis, MO



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