Tears

wet and salty they

hold my sorrows and mem’ries

’till we meet on that white shore

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Carrie! : )
It is but Richard, come to welcome you and enjoy one of your excellent renderings.
This one (almost a Senryu) touches deeply with the emotion of holding another who's gone in the teardrop of one's heart's yearning remembrance … sooo sensitively endearing!

By virtue of the depth in your words, I've glimpsed the soul of the woman behind them — warmly and gently you breathe … thank you, Carrie! ⁓ Richard

[Carrie Ann G]

Thank you Richard for your kind words :)

[Richard🖌]

I, too, am grateful to You, Carrie Ann!

[Marianne Rose]

I picture you standing on a beach looking out at the vast sea, trapped here, but anticipating the white shore on the other side where your Love waits. Each tear holding a different memory, combined they stream with the sorrow of loss. A simple poem that evokes so much feeling.

[J. J. Nightingale]

I can relate .... Tears keep us company..till we are reunited
..........................

Soft-tender


Jazz