Give it up

Give it up

A Poem by Vanmoriel
"

Rita, THIS IS TO YOU! Its you. It's always been you. I love YOU. I don't know what made you think otherwise...but its no one but you.

"

You tore down my walls
Just to show me what you could do
You hit me so hard
Left me so cold
My skin is turning black and blue
Was it all a dream
Those things you said to me
I thought we were in this together
There was no one else

Just your hand that I felt
How do I make this more clear??
You were the first
To lift me up this high
I never new of love
Until you walked by

And as you call my name
I'm running back again
I need you here
I need you now


 

© 2008 Vanmoriel


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i love you im here now


Posted 16 Years Ago


full of emotion, I can almost hear someone shouting it with a painful heart!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Vanmoriel
Vanmoriel

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