There's beauty in her breakdown

There's beauty in her breakdown

A Poem by Vanmoriel
"

think I'm headed for a...breakdown

"

There's a beauty in her breakdown
One that you can't see.
There's a smile creeping on her face
As she watches herself bleed.
There's no more room inside her lungs
She won't let herself breathe.
She can't control the laughter
The pain it feels so good.
Her life is spinning out of control
She can't get the help she knows she should.

There's a beuty in her breakdown
One that you can't touch.
She'll use you over and over again.
She'll use you as a crutch.
She's open to anything that you want
But make it your last request.
Cause as you close your eyes my friend,
She'll stab you in the chest.

There's a beauty in her breakdown
One she cannot fight.
There's so much she can't take back now,
And no way to make it right.

© 2008 Vanmoriel


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ummm...carri?....do we need to talk about somethin babe?

Posted 16 Years Ago


i really like this in the way its written compared to the feeling it gives off...love the word use love the structure...but thge emotion...its firece!

Risa Jean

Posted 16 Years Ago



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