How could you?

How could you?

A Poem by Vanmoriel
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its about the biggest liar I've ever met on the face of the planet... YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE!!!

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You tore down everything we built.
You have her that ring,

Now live with your guilt.

10 months to the day
Then you decided

To throw my love away

You make me sick
I can't believe I EVER trusted you

You're just like her....


HOW--F*****G--COULD YOU?!?!?

 

 

 

 

 

I hate you.

© 2008 Vanmoriel


Author's Note

Vanmoriel
Don't EVER believe a word that they say.....its never true.

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i cant believe you really felt that way becuz of me...i dont want that anymore...i just want us...please dont feel that way again...it hurts knowing that, even for a moment....you hated me...because of something i did trying to make someone else feel better about themselves....i cant believe it hurt you that badly...i'm so sorry...please...carri....forgive me?? becasue i love you...more than you'll ever know...and sometimes you deny it but carri...something we both know is that i AM alot like her...but this is one major difference between us...i wont f**k you over like she did....we have something true...please forgive me....

Posted 16 Years Ago


oh yeah....i've been there, except he never even told me it was over, he just decided to walk away with out a word...

great piece though :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


this seems to be more of a rant then a poem, but hey WTH eh?
What better way to say go to hell then with a bit of poetry right? :)

chin up and fists out girl, never let'em see you sweat. ;)

with 50 billion people in the world, you can work it out without him.

l8r g8r
-Tao

Posted 16 Years Ago


ut---ohhhhhhh guy problems???? I can feel your anger there!!!!! Or did a friend gossip and someone beleived them or something>>> this poem keeps me guessing... nice work i enjoyed it....and good luck with the love problems

Posted 16 Years Ago


...what happened?

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 9, 2008

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