1st enstallment:alliteration

Ok ya so I'm gonna start writing and what ever gets put down gets put down I don't own rights to the image

 

 

Who knew drones disasterously demolished during tuesdays death

would leave such an affection on me

dealing so deep dueling personas would definetly detract from the difinite

then of course leading to the indifinite the maybe

which I would willingly accept while not want to weild this wonderous wound

upon my shoulders

But for her having a hoarse voice hense hurling hurt

and pain to the wind was reasonable

would well be worthwhile for with time would wither away whilst

still having her around

nearing niether death nor life numbing nostalgia

pleaged the body, mind, and soul for both alike

for which furthermore few would find fathomable for she found freely refudge far away

metaphoricly speaking for she

not nerveless never lied in nirvana but nihilistic nature

all around her

after ever affect and effect earning each anything an affection is all

thats left of what was once a human

while I would wish with all my will this would wake and walk away

this poem can't end

victimized in volume this vent vears very

close the turth

lingers lump lusting life losing love whilest learning life

takes pity on no one.

 

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar, mispelt words, ect. This will be probably be the first part of a series of poems. Keep in mind I just wrote this on here(its my first draft) so its bound to not be as best as it could, but give me some feedback please.

Reviews

[Dorchadas]

Wow, this is amazingly intense.
I had to reread it a few times...
(flashbacks to school... studying Shakespear, nose stuck to the page, thinking "If I get close enough I'll absorb it better..." Lol)
Beautifully descriptive... very visual... so very open (true show of strength) heartfelt and honest.
Haunting memories... beautifully captured in a haunting poem.

...more please ~grins~