Someday

It'll all get better in time....

 

 

Someday, the flowers will bloom in my favor.

Someday, the rewards of my efforts I'll savor.

Someday, a round of applause they'll give.

When they hear my voice sing, I'll finally live.

No one wants to feel alone.

I want someone to love me, to call my own.

Someday, I'll be loved, cherished and wanted.

No longer will all my thoughts be haunted,

With the dreams of things I wish would be.

They will become life, I'll make everyone see.

Someday , they odds will turn for me.

Someday, someday...

 

Author's Note

Hey, new here but not new to this sort of thing. What do you guys think of my stuff? I take crits and coms! Thanx!

Reviews

[Wildecat]

I think you did a fantastic job writing this poem, I like it. Short sweet and too the point.

[Akash]

why do you think this poem is not to a certain level...
i think its really beautiful
a sound and secure tale of hope and wishes
i feel glad....

[CarolynLewisPoe]

I think it's a good poem. I believe I can do way better but overall, not a horrible read....I think anyways...