Space and Time

Space and Time

A Poem by Caroline Hart
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A snippet of emotion.

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You are my space and time, my formless and eternal. 

You are my past, present and future. 

I surrender to your gravitational pull, for as hard as I will myself to leave I cannot, I am bound to you as you are to me. 

United in an energy that keeps us close, our paths forever crossed. I’m lost in the vacuum of your eyes, falling deeply into you.

 I still fall for you, 

every time.




pic taken from http://t1na.deviantart.com 

© 2015 Caroline Hart


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Marvelous writing! It felt like two celestial bodies, being pulled closer by their gravitational pulls, yet the repeats over and over again.....maybe more like a comet....returning every now and then for "seconds".....:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Caroline Hart

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I like your perspective - yes I agree we're definitely sucked into 'seconds' :) Thanks fo.. read more
So creative, very sweet sentiment and love the creative format and
picture! Overall a piece to be proud of:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Caroline Hart

9 Years Ago

Thanks Jamestown! I probably could've done more with it...rode the inspiration wave as it came - was.. read more

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Added on March 31, 2015
Last Updated on April 4, 2015
Tags: flash fiction, prose, love, space, time, energy

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Caroline Hart
Caroline Hart

South Africa



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