I can hear the sound of his heart beating in his chest It is the sound of life playing to its own individual beat and rhythm
I hear the whisper of my name as it flows unbidden from his lips It floats across waves of sound until it settles into the deep parts of my soul like a gentle kiss it touches me fills me with its warmth
His love frees me lifts me up and carries me upon winds of change into to a future I could never have dreamt of
In his arms I am free Laughter fills my spirit and I overflow with joy
Finally safe in the strong arms of love I drift away on tides of passion that enthrall me
I float upon moonbeams as his love penetrates my being Encapsulating me in waves of delight taking me to a place beyond my wildest dreams
I am alive in his love healed by his kisses that dance with free abandon upon the softness of my skin
Every cell in my body tingles in the beauty of his touch Heat rises pumping the blood of passion through my veins
His love engulfs me and I melt into his burning flesh Melded together as one we ride upon waves of ecstasy
Soaring higher and higher with every beat of our hearts Until we reach a place beyond the highest stars
Then the fire of our passion burns to embers at last and we collapse content and at peace into the beautiful warmth
Beautiful photo and a amazing poetry. Good to desire to dance in passion.
"Every cell in my body tingles
in the beauty of his touch
Heat rises
pumping the blood of passion through my veins "
I enjoyed the poem. The above lines were my favorite. Best poetry is about real love and passion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
This poem is a recipe for passion. Your diction in this poem is fantastic. I can almost feel so many emotions from this poem. This part here "I float upon moonbeams
as his love penetrates my being
Encapsulating me in waves of delight
taking me to a place beyond my wildest dreams" Simply elegance. The attention to detail is wonderful. You're a great writer Carolann
Another beautiful poem dear Carolann. I felt a great joy reading this and looking at your photo, I am now compelled to write a poem about your beautiful eyes. Very nice.
first of all, let me say that the photo is stunningly beautiful, wow! secondly, you have a gift of writing from the cuff (or off the sleeve, if you prefer) about things which you have imagined or experienced but are not currently happening, but seem real because of the clarity and passion with which you write. i love fantasy pieces, many of mine are that very entity. you exhibit a deep loving heart and a wonderful gift here. awesome write!
Lovely picture first off, you are very beautiful. This dreamlike state just floats on the page, lulling me in a wonderful sense of warmth...there's more security than heat in this read, it's that feeling that only comes from trust and mutual admiration. Nicely pen'd Carolann...it's an amazing glimpse into perfect harmony.
You dream quite well! A beautiful fantasy that you brought to life.
You're stunning in the photo - gorgeous smiling eyes. You do look as if you are in love!
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Oh I wish lol but thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I saw the poetry in your face in the picture dear.
He must have been the one taking the photo as your expression is beaming! I fir one can never fake my expressions for pictures... Im amazed that others can "pose" so well.
This poem did not feel like a pose at all. Pure joy!
I am Vulnerable
Broken
Strong and Fearless
I am all things to all people
Yet I belong to none
I am Elusive
Unknown
A whisper of things to come
I am a Warrior
In an endless war
Victori.. more..