Heat Rises

Heat Rises

A Poem by Carolann Dowsett
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At least I can dream :)

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I can hear the sound of his heart 
beating in his chest
It is the sound of life 
playing to its own individual beat and rhythm 

I hear the whisper of my name 
as it flows unbidden from his lips 
It floats across waves of sound 
until it settles into the deep parts of my soul
like a gentle kiss it touches me 
fills me with its warmth 

His love frees me
lifts me up and carries me 
upon winds of change 
into to a future 
I could never have dreamt of 

In his arms 
I am free 
Laughter fills my spirit 
and I overflow with joy 

Finally safe 
in the strong arms of love
I drift away 
on tides of passion 
that enthrall me 

I float upon moonbeams 
as his love penetrates my being
Encapsulating me in waves of delight
taking me to a place beyond my wildest dreams 

I am alive in his love 
healed by his kisses
that dance with free abandon 
upon the softness of my skin 

Every cell in my body tingles 
in the beauty of his touch 
Heat rises 
pumping the blood of passion through my veins 

His love engulfs me 
and I melt into his burning flesh 
Melded together as one 
we ride upon waves of ecstasy 

Soaring higher and higher
with every beat of our hearts 
Until we reach a place 
beyond the highest stars  

Then the fire of our passion
burns to embers at last 
and we collapse 
content and at peace 
into the beautiful warmth 
of each others arms 


© 2013 Carolann Dowsett


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Featured Review

Beautiful photo and a amazing poetry. Good to desire to dance in passion.
"Every cell in my body tingles
in the beauty of his touch
Heat rises
pumping the blood of passion through my veins "
I enjoyed the poem. The above lines were my favorite. Best poetry is about real love and passion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I re-read the poem. Photo is beautiful and the words are amazing.
Carolann Dowsett

9 Years Ago

Thank you 😊 Means a lot
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.



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This is a very beautiful love poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed
a little dizzying.

a beginning, a middle, and end.





Posted 9 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

nope. i just meant, like, it sort of swirled upwards.
Carolann Dowsett

9 Years Ago

Oh ok cool :)
The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

a little spun out, though :)
WOW! Stunning. You keep the intensity right through out. Beautiful wording. Everything to love about this! it made me happy while I was reading. Great talent you have.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you that means a lot to me.
Matt

11 Years Ago

you're very welcome.
Beautiful photo and a amazing poetry. Good to desire to dance in passion.
"Every cell in my body tingles
in the beauty of his touch
Heat rises
pumping the blood of passion through my veins "
I enjoyed the poem. The above lines were my favorite. Best poetry is about real love and passion. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

I re-read the poem. Photo is beautiful and the words are amazing.
Carolann Dowsett

9 Years Ago

Thank you 😊 Means a lot
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This is sensual love in its perfection!! I'm speechless really. Giving you 100....I'd score higher if I could. Lol... ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Wow thank you so much means a lot.
Omg that beautiful picture WOW!!!! like molten lava churning against volcanic rock.. I'm consumed by the burning passion emitted by this poem. Excellent writing hun!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kee you always bring a smile to my face :)
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Mir
The love throughout this poem is so evident and strong! I'm very happy for you! :)
I particularly liked the last two stanzas.
You're so very talented and I really do enjoy reading your poetry! Great job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Miranda, though its all just a fantasy.
The first poem I have read from Carolann, one that I enjoyed, a poem that is very well paced, written with care and thought.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
Very erotic and romantic. Your poem flowed very smoothly, great choice of words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
The images of freedom and happiness made the poem live and breathe for the reader. Your words work magic here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much.

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Carolann Dowsett
Carolann Dowsett

Copacabana, NSW, Australia



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