Alive

Listen                                                                                                 

can you hear                   

the sound of silence          

is deafening to my ears

 

Look                                

can you see me               

I am real                             

flesh and blood            

tears and sorrow                                          

laughter and joy

 

Not just a figment        

of your imagination                                           

a fantasy 

to your mind

 

Touch me                      

can you feel me                  

I am solid                          

living                                                  

breathing                                                      

alive

 

A warrior                        

strong                         

fearless                  

emotional                      

broken

 

Moving through the light                      

between worlds unseen

Drifting through lands

of myriad dreams

 

Close your eyes

and follow me

Let go of the physical

embrace the spiritual

 

 

Reviews

[chandlerl]

oooo....I like this one. It was really powerful. Adamant.

Look

'can you see me

I am real

flesh and blood

tears and sorrow

laughter and joy'

This would be really beautiful read aloud.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks so much

[Devanshu Rajput]

i agree with Mr.Richard the last verse was great...wonderful read.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Devanshu Rajput]

your welcome

[Richard Man]

Last verse.... this is you... total commitment... Oh brave wounded soldier of light

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you so much :)

[quinfinn]

very profound and exquisite write...too human to ignore. you have a way of bringing your heart to life in your writes....very rare quality!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you so much.