Rest in Me

Rest in me
I'll rest in you 
Until the stars 
fade from the sky 

Make me yours 
I'll make you mine 
In love’s caress 
we shall abide 

Join with me
in a lover’s dance 
take me higher 
than the sun 

Spirit to spirit 
Soul to soul 
Two flesh 
becoming one

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Great to see you back in here, hope you've brought some sun along. Don't know how i missed this sweet as honey write. It's so much part of your character, personality... the urges, the charm and all.

It's also very much a start as you mean go on from you, this is lovely: '' Rest in me - I'll rest in you - Until the stars - fade from the sky.'

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks Emma really glad you like it.

[emmajoy]

Seems you;'re back in the cafe again, good to find an old friend. Think the length of our hair is still pretty well the same! :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh nice. 😊 I missed this place and you guys. I’m hoping to become active again.

[emmajoy]

Great, will review as often as I can! Often look as if sitting here juggling words but often busy away doing things with numbers too! Enjoy, yourself.. this is a great place to be.. 99% of the time!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Yes I agree Emma, if only life would stop getting in the way

[emmajoy]

Laughed at that BUT very appropriate

Off and away for a while. Take care of yourself .

[Carolann Dowsett]

You too Emma

[Mir]

This reminds me of my own poem!:)
This was nice and had a melody to it. Great job!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[K.C. Zbryk]

I like the simplicity of this piece. It has a very gentle feel to it that leaves the reader smiling at the end. Very nicely composed.. Nothing grafic just a demostration of purity.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you nice way to put it, I like that :)

[.]

This is a sweet one, I like the flow. : )

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[.]

You're welcome. :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

that's better..something uplifting....I always struggle with sadness in poetry and there is a lot of it

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[The Nameless]

Short and sweet

Wonderful poem, romantic poem

Glad you do have a poem about love and happiness!

Well done =D

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Maria M]

Beautifully written! Well done!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Inda]

Romantic and passionate at the end. Nice one.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Jack...]

Now this is what I like to see. I think I see your smile glowing in this piece. Nice.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Beautiful simply and simply lovely!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yehh