Rest in Me

Rest in me
I'll rest in you 
Until the stars 
fade from the sky 

Make me yours 
I'll make you mine 
In love’s caress 
we shall abide 

Join with me
in a lover’s dance 
take me higher 
than the sun 

Spirit to spirit 
Soul to soul 
Two flesh 
becoming one

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Great to see you back in here, hope you've brought some sun along. Don't know how i missed this sweet as honey write. It's so much part of your character, personality... the urges, the charm and all.

It's also very much a start as you mean go on from you, this is lovely: '' Rest in me - I'll rest in you - Until the stars - fade from the sky.'

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks Emma really glad you like it.

[emmajoy]

Seems you;'re back in the cafe again, good to find an old friend. Think the length of our hair is still pretty well the same! :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh nice. 😊 I missed this place and you guys. I’m hoping to become active again.

[emmajoy]

Great, will review as often as I can! Often look as if sitting here juggling words but often busy away doing things with numbers too! Enjoy, yourself.. this is a great place to be.. 99% of the time!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Yes I agree Emma, if only life would stop getting in the way

[emmajoy]

Laughed at that BUT very appropriate

Off and away for a while. Take care of yourself .

[Carolann Dowsett]

You too Emma

[KCthelastboyscout]

A sweet statement of love.these are words written from the heart

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you 😊

[Overrated-World]

such a beautiful write, from a beautiful imaginative mind.
great work :) short but powerful

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[KeeD]

This was so passionate and just wow.. :) short and sweet, it makes love worth it. Loved this read.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you so much :)

[Salar Majak]

such a delicate peice of great poetry, love flows as gently as the words flow, great work

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. Good to join in the lover's dance. A nice cozy place to be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem of love.
Coyote

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Dream Weaver]

Short and sweet, and still speaks volumes.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Emerald Seas]

Lovely

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[CreativeStroke]

A beautiful simplicity, telling a compelling love story. Beautifully done Carolann!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you.

[Baby Ricochet]

Pretty. Nice write Carolann. Thank you

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you Ricochet.

[Frieda P]

So straight forward with a swift impact, love it!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks Frieda :)