Rest in Me

Rest in me
I'll rest in you 
Until the stars 
fade from the sky 

Make me yours 
I'll make you mine 
In love’s caress 
we shall abide 

Join with me
in a lover’s dance 
take me higher 
than the sun 

Spirit to spirit 
Soul to soul 
Two flesh 
becoming one

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Great to see you back in here, hope you've brought some sun along. Don't know how i missed this sweet as honey write. It's so much part of your character, personality... the urges, the charm and all.

It's also very much a start as you mean go on from you, this is lovely: '' Rest in me - I'll rest in you - Until the stars - fade from the sky.'

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks Emma really glad you like it.

[emmajoy]

Seems you;'re back in the cafe again, good to find an old friend. Think the length of our hair is still pretty well the same! :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Oh nice. 😊 I missed this place and you guys. I’m hoping to become active again.

[emmajoy]

Great, will review as often as I can! Often look as if sitting here juggling words but often busy away doing things with numbers too! Enjoy, yourself.. this is a great place to be.. 99% of the time!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Yes I agree Emma, if only life would stop getting in the way

[emmajoy]

Laughed at that BUT very appropriate

Off and away for a while. Take care of yourself .

[Carolann Dowsett]

You too Emma

[Poetic Beauty]

This is intimate and loving. Sweet and beautiful

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you, that’s lovely

[Chris Shaw]

Such a gentle romantic read. Great flow and visual with it. I very much liked what I read here.

Chris

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks Chris

[Planet x]

That's so beautiful , made me cry

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you 😊

[Karmee]

This is so very good, I really enjoyed this write.
Very creative, love the imagery you write with.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks so much

[Levi Levin]

You did a great job by blending nature into the realities of human life.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks Levi

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That's so wonderful. Love has to be that way. Two souls turning into one.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks Sky. Yes that’s a beautiful way of putting it

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your most welcome friend :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Your short, but poignant write reminded me of these lines from a Bob Marley song;

“One love, one heart . . .
Let’s get together and feel all right”

Lovely piece – a lovely composition - :-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you I’m glad you like it.

[Tate Morgan]

I saw you were online thought id stop by. Nice to see you here again i myself havent been here much of late. Yours is the romantic heart i think unrequited

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thanks Tate good to catch up again. It would be nice to come back at some stage but life has a way of keeping us busy. You still writing?

[Tate Morgan]

I havent written in awhile I might take it up again. Was waiting for life to settle a bit round here

[Carolann Dowsett]

Life never really settles. I think we just have to write around it.

[Tate Morgan]

Well you may be right about that. i guess i felt like it wasnt any fun to write here anymore. But it will recover soon enough. But i think the main thing was my well ran dry and i was just giving it time to refill

[Carolann Dowsett]

Yes that I can understand. I’m writing more songs now than anything else. I guess we just have to go with the creative flow.

[Neville]

Simple as that but quite delightful too & certainly worthy of every one of the positive reviews that pre date my own contribution.....N

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you Neville