Hungry Eyes

You look at me

with those hungry eyes

Trying to beguile me

to hypnotise

 

Your mouth drips honey

words sweeter than wine

You like the feel of my hair

the way my eyes shine

 

You devour my body

with lustful delight

try to tempt me with kisses

set my passion alight

 

You try every trick

in your book of seduction

but I’ve read the ending

and it leads to destruction

 

Are you in love with me

do you admire my mind

or are you just a sleaze

looking for a good time

 

Do you think that I’m easy

that you can do as you please

maul me and push me

then call me a tease

 

I’m looking for love

not a one night stand

So forget all your fantasies

give up your plans

 

Go find someone else

to fulfil your desires

Cause I’m fed up with creeps

players and liars

 

If you want to date me

then show some respect

Take time to know me

we just might connect

 

We might find something special

that’s deeper than lust

Something with meaning

that we both can trust

 

So back off a bit

give me some space

Take your eyes off my b***s

and look at my face

 

I’m not just a plaything

for you to abuse

I’m a real live girl

and I won’t be used.

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

That had some moxy to it girl! Kind of playful yet direct with a lot of impact to back it up....

'Are you in love with me
do you admire my mind
or are you just a sleaze
looking for a good time'

Yeah, like that one...pow to the kisser, those classes are paying off! Good one.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha thanks Frieda I must say it brought a smile to my face when this came out :)

[Frieda P]

Brought a smile to my face for you ;-)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha awesome :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

WELL SAID!!!!!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[LA Lorena]

Oh, I like this! You tell em girl!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :) Glad you like it :)

[Richard Man]

Well said. I was singing along with this protest song. Great write.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Maria M]

My favorite poem of yours I have to admit!! This is brilliant
my favorite part has to be:

Go find someone else
to fulfil your desires
Cause I’m fed up with creeps
players and liars

You explained it so well the fact that you are a woman which should be treated with respect.

This is brilliant!!

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you so much :)

[Jack...]

Umm...what color are your eyes? Sorry, very forceful and to the point. Nothing like hitting someone with a 2x4 to get their attention. Nice job.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha thank you was for the Aussie guys who don't know how to treat a lady as a lady. :)

[Tate Morgan]

This is the best youve done I am as you know a fan of rhyme and meter

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)

[Night]

...wow, that read like a gangsta rap...sweet rhyme, perfection, players beware...I have to agree with Frieda...you got moxy girl...Bravo.:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha thank you now my secrets out I'm really a gangsta in disguise :-)

[Night]

...I knew it..lol....a gangster of love...:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Haha now that I like :-)

[The Nameless]

Thank you!!! For saying that on behalf of all us girls!

Great poem, really, so honest and true.

I really hope this meant at least something to that kind of guys, who read it.

Much enjoyed reading, as always =D

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :) glad you liked it :)

[AlchemicPlutonian]

Not even just a bit of a tease?
I'm just kidding, but I'm sure you can be quite the seductress when you want to be.
With words like these.

[Carolann Dowsett]

Thank you :)