Life Eternal

Life Eternal

A Poem by Carolann Dowsett

Drifting

floating upwards

Escaping the darkness

where the lost reside

 

Upwards

Eternity beckons

calls my name

death’s embrace denied

 

Glorious light

warmth

love 

peace

fills me

I drown in its beauty

 

Flying through space

endless time

I travel beyond the known

to mysteries unspoken

© 2013 Carolann Dowsett


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I'm giggling at baby ric's review haha.
As for the poem have you ever had an outer body experience? It kind of feels like that's the calmness one feels at least that's what I perceived through this piece. I haven't had one but my mother has and she described it to me. She said it was the most collectively calm and peaceful feeling she has ever experienced but she was scared to leave us behind so she struggled back down into herself. I wanted to know what she was smoking but apparently she still states that it really happened like a vivid dream. Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) No I haven't its just my view on death I guess and on escaping hell.
KeeD

11 Years Ago

You really help the reader find beauty in death through this piece then, it's like a calm peace that.. read more
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) Yes I do believe that heart and soul, death is not the end with God but only the beginn.. read more



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Felt like this was a death lullaby, strong yet gentle and floating. In some weird way, it was reassuring and comforting. Nice, I like this one a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
A gentle and ethereal piece, well written and evoking several images; firstly escaping death, secondly entering a between state at death, thirdly dreaming or lastly a drug induced state, the reader chooses.

Posted 11 Years Ago


That moment when gravity gives way - and your caught in astral travel
Good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Aly
I love this.
So deep.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thanks Aly :)
"Glorious light
warmth
love
peace
fills me
I drown in its beauty"... A brief glimpse of the journey into the light and beyond...where death has lost it's sting....a beautiful poem, romantic and Heavenly all at the same time...Nice.:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you glad you enjoyed :)
Night

11 Years Ago

I did...and you're very welcome.:)
wonderful piece, mother dearest. :P
It explains alot. Gives an image to those who read.
again short but very powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on January 4, 2013
Last Updated on January 4, 2013
Tags: love, hope, peace, eternity, mystery

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Carolann Dowsett
Carolann Dowsett

Copacabana, NSW, Australia



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I am Vulnerable Broken Strong and Fearless I am all things to all people Yet I belong to none I am Elusive Unknown A whisper of things to come I am a Warrior In an endless war Victori.. more..

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