I'm giggling at baby ric's review haha.
As for the poem have you ever had an outer body experience? It kind of feels like that's the calmness one feels at least that's what I perceived through this piece. I haven't had one but my mother has and she described it to me. She said it was the most collectively calm and peaceful feeling she has ever experienced but she was scared to leave us behind so she struggled back down into herself. I wanted to know what she was smoking but apparently she still states that it really happened like a vivid dream. Great write
Thank you :) No I haven't its just my view on death I guess and on escaping hell.
11 Years Ago
You really help the reader find beauty in death through this piece then, it's like a calm peace that.. read moreYou really help the reader find beauty in death through this piece then, it's like a calm peace that people long for their entire life.. not just "Story Over" but like the beginning of a happy story.
11 Years Ago
Thank you :) Yes I do believe that heart and soul, death is not the end with God but only the beginn.. read moreThank you :) Yes I do believe that heart and soul, death is not the end with God but only the beginning.
I'm giggling at baby ric's review haha.
As for the poem have you ever had an outer body experience? It kind of feels like that's the calmness one feels at least that's what I perceived through this piece. I haven't had one but my mother has and she described it to me. She said it was the most collectively calm and peaceful feeling she has ever experienced but she was scared to leave us behind so she struggled back down into herself. I wanted to know what she was smoking but apparently she still states that it really happened like a vivid dream. Great write
Thank you :) No I haven't its just my view on death I guess and on escaping hell.
11 Years Ago
You really help the reader find beauty in death through this piece then, it's like a calm peace that.. read moreYou really help the reader find beauty in death through this piece then, it's like a calm peace that people long for their entire life.. not just "Story Over" but like the beginning of a happy story.
11 Years Ago
Thank you :) Yes I do believe that heart and soul, death is not the end with God but only the beginn.. read moreThank you :) Yes I do believe that heart and soul, death is not the end with God but only the beginning.
I found this interesting as it talks about a travelling soul which transcends time and space. I love how the poem flows and the imagery behind it. Cool work!
A peaceful and hopeful journey in your words. I like the flow of thoughts and the very nice ending. We need beauty and mystery to keep our hope alive. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
I am Vulnerable
Broken
Strong and Fearless
I am all things to all people
Yet I belong to none
I am Elusive
Unknown
A whisper of things to come
I am a Warrior
In an endless war
Victori.. more..