Life Eternal

Life Eternal

A Poem by Carolann Dowsett

Drifting

floating upwards

Escaping the darkness

where the lost reside

 

Upwards

Eternity beckons

calls my name

death’s embrace denied

 

Glorious light

warmth

love 

peace

fills me

I drown in its beauty

 

Flying through space

endless time

I travel beyond the known

to mysteries unspoken

© 2013 Carolann Dowsett


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I'm giggling at baby ric's review haha.
As for the poem have you ever had an outer body experience? It kind of feels like that's the calmness one feels at least that's what I perceived through this piece. I haven't had one but my mother has and she described it to me. She said it was the most collectively calm and peaceful feeling she has ever experienced but she was scared to leave us behind so she struggled back down into herself. I wanted to know what she was smoking but apparently she still states that it really happened like a vivid dream. Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) No I haven't its just my view on death I guess and on escaping hell.
KeeD

11 Years Ago

You really help the reader find beauty in death through this piece then, it's like a calm peace that.. read more
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) Yes I do believe that heart and soul, death is not the end with God but only the beginn.. read more



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I'm giggling at baby ric's review haha.
As for the poem have you ever had an outer body experience? It kind of feels like that's the calmness one feels at least that's what I perceived through this piece. I haven't had one but my mother has and she described it to me. She said it was the most collectively calm and peaceful feeling she has ever experienced but she was scared to leave us behind so she struggled back down into herself. I wanted to know what she was smoking but apparently she still states that it really happened like a vivid dream. Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) No I haven't its just my view on death I guess and on escaping hell.
KeeD

11 Years Ago

You really help the reader find beauty in death through this piece then, it's like a calm peace that.. read more
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :) Yes I do believe that heart and soul, death is not the end with God but only the beginn.. read more
I'd have taken a GPS. Great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Haha thank you :)
A pleasant journey certainly, with the assurance that our ideals are still intact.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you
I found this interesting as it talks about a travelling soul which transcends time and space. I love how the poem flows and the imagery behind it. Cool work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
A peaceful and hopeful journey in your words. I like the flow of thoughts and the very nice ending. We need beauty and mystery to keep our hope alive. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Buetiful poem love it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
The imagination can take you anywhere you want to go, front row seat... a wonderfully uplifting read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it :)
This is a beautiful poem...so comforting too! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed :)
Leaves me wanting more, great build up. Really enjoyed it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
This is a deep mysterious piece with dark undertones and Strong emotion. Wonderful job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Jordan's Back

11 Years Ago

Always :)

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Added on January 4, 2013
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Tags: love, hope, peace, eternity, mystery

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Carolann Dowsett
Carolann Dowsett

Copacabana, NSW, Australia



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