I am Vulnerable Broken Strong and Fearless I am all things to all people Yet I belong to none I am Elusive Unknown A whisper of things to come I am a Warrior In an endless war Victorious Wounded Battle weary The scars of life remain visible on my soul I am soft and gentle Loving and kind Immovable Full of Light I am Passionate Longing Tactile and Sensitive I am Unbreakable Willful Determined I am a woman A little girl A spiritual being I am Pure Renewed Refreshed Laughter and Joy Tears and Sorrow I am Deep Intelligent Serious yet Fun I am Childish and Playful Brave A Lioness Fierce and Feisty I am Honest Direct Creative A Secret yet to be Revealed A Mystery ready to be solved
You are indeed a complex, brilliant person, and it is an honor for each of us to know you. Thank you for sharing these stirring views inside your mind and heart. There is truly no such thing as a simple mind...
It's really wonderful to know yourself, but if this were true, you would be perfect and we nailed the last perfect person to a cross some 2000 years ago. I'm sure there might be some stuff that you could work on.......maybe......not a lot, but some.......great poem....thanks for sharing
"I am a Warrior
In an endless war
Victorious
Wounded
Battle weary
The scars of life remain visible on my soul"
You make it so clear what it feels like to be human, to be alive.
All these adjectives and qualities you've described and the way you've placed them makes it a very enticing read. I've become a fan of your work :D! xoxo
I love this! I love all the different things you mentioned, like warrior, lioness, etc. Very creative! The last two lines are spectacular. You did a really nice job with this one!
You are all these things and you are much more, for you are more complex than words can describe; as we all are. This is what i got from it. Great poem, thanks for posting.
I am Vulnerable
Broken
Strong and Fearless
I am all things to all people
Yet I belong to none
I am Elusive
Unknown
A whisper of things to come
I am a Warrior
In an endless war
Victori.. more..