~ Snowdrop Dancer ~

Reviews

[Aura]

This was an enchanting read. I loved the presentation of the poem to make it look almost like a ballerinas figure. Your description of a snow drop in comparing it to a beautiful ballerina is top notch from its slender stems to its white skirt, you illustrate a beautiful image of a snow drop.

[Carola]

hi aura, pleased you liked the poem, & thanks for stopping to read & comment.
cheerio carola

[Aura]

You are welcome!

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Oh, wow! I love the title of this poem. So great! I also love the craftiness of the display of this poem. The words themselves, lovely.

[Carola]

hi linda, i'm a visual person so I like to dress up all my poem words with images. thanks for stopping by to read & comment.
cheerio carola

[Chris Shaw]

I revisited this delight. Such a pleasure in midwinter when I am waiting for the cusp of spring to arrive along with a show of snowdrops. Thank you Carola.

Chris

[Carola]

hi chris, oh wow! i'm so delighted you thought my poem worthy of a 2nd read.
thank you kindly for saying so.
cheerio carola
ps. we here in australia will enter winter in a few days time.

[zainul]

Stuck my eyes on the wonderful ballerina motif.Very creative and lovely.
Thank you Carola for presenting the beauty of snowdrop in a unique way.

[Carola]

thanks for stopping by to read & comment zainul
cheerio carola

[zainul]

You are most welcome!
Happy New Year ,2023!

[willweb]

That was nice. A concrete poem I believe this would be called though concrete and flowers just doesn't seem to go together. : )
I enjoyed this today

[Carola]

thanks for reading & commenting will.
cheerio carola

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

That’s absolutely beautiful writing ✍️
Love the pic and layout too

[Carola]

glad you liked it julie.
i'm a visual person so i like to dress up my poems.
cheerio carola

[Kim S.]

Awww this is such a wonderful, delightful read. really enjoyed. love the shape of the write as well.

[Carola]

thanks beckie for stopping by to comment. that was my 2nd shaped poem, it's quite fun & challenging to do them. the other one is titled 'beetles'
have great sunday cheerio carola

[Kim S.]

how to do you get the backgrounds? I would love to try that with a couple of my poems.

[Carola]

i found the snowdrop photo & the drawing online.
printed out the drawing & then I drew the ballerina to the snowdrop myself, took a photo, scanned it & uploaded to my computer.
all my poems I write on my pages program, add what photos or pics that I want in the program, then take a screenshot & upload the screenshot to writers cafe.

[Kim S.]

ok, thank you........

[Stuart Munro]

Beautiful poem , the artwork is lovely , really well written , brought inner poetry Yoga

[Carola]

thanks for stopping by to read & comment stuart.
i like your concept..."inner poetry yoga"read morethanks for stopping by to read & comment stuart.
i like your concept..."inner poetry yoga"
heerio carola

[Stuart Munro]

Feng shui your inner being

[Robert Trakofler]

I have never seen these before I did not know they existed and I love the poem and your description of them:)

[Carola]

hi robert, thanks for stopping by to read & comment. wishing you well, cheerio carola

[Carola]

i wrote another 'form' poem a while ago called 'beetles' for my great niece & nephews, if you're interested.
have a great sunday robert
cheerio carola 👋

[Robert Haigh]

A beautifully constructed and poetically rendered "shape poem" - I love snowdrops too. They are very photogenic and a joy to see. A lovely poem, Carola!

[Carola]

hi robert, thanks for stopping by to read & comment. pleased u liked it.
cheerio carola

[Relic]

Your words are so elegant and interesting. I like the design of the poem as well. This is top notch writing from you, Carola. Awesome poem. :)

[Carola]

thanks for stopping by to read & your kind review tim.
i like my poems to be about different topics, trying to remember now, I think this is my 2 or 3 shaped poem.
I'll never write love poems, firstly there's a plethora of them, & secondly I don't consider myself a romantic.
cheerio carola