~ Rainbow ~

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

I envy you for having such fabulous opportunities for bird watching. I've looked at some of your photos and have been mightily impressed by all those colorful creatures. We have robins, cardinals, blue jays and hummingbirds, but nothing to compete with your Ms. Rainbow.

[Carola]

sorry for my delay in replying sam, I'm just getting around checking all my received comments. I've not been on WC in over a year.
cheerio carola

[zainul]

Dazzling Lorikeet is my favourite bird.You have nicknamed her quite exactly.
A very lovely write indeed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such a pleasantly ethereal write...i think of one who is nymph-like...one we all stop to observe as she passes by, like that multi-colored image in the sky.
j.

[emmajoy]

Attractively presented, descriptive and amusing phrasing, a fine way to share your take on a Rainbow vision!

[Papaya]

this is really cute!
it needs pictures! i can see it as a cute little book for wee ones

[Carola]

you can see a photo in my photo section. i didn't want to add a photo to the poem as it would spoil my hoped for surprise.
cheerio carola

[Papaya]

So cute!!!!!

[Carola]

i'm curious to know, did you guess before the end that it wasn't a person by the way i phrased my poem, or was it a surprise ?
cheerio carola

[Papaya]

I thought it was a bubbly young girl

[Carola]

oh good !!
i wanted people to think it was a person, only to find out towards the end that it was actually a rainbow lorikeet. by the way i wrote 'she' but we have no idea as to its sex, as both have same colourings
cheerio carola