~ Rainbow ~

~ Rainbow ~

A Poem by Carola

© 2020 Carola


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I envy you for having such fabulous opportunities for bird watching. I've looked at some of your photos and have been mightily impressed by all those colorful creatures. We have robins, cardinals, blue jays and hummingbirds, but nothing to compete with your Ms. Rainbow.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carola

2 Years Ago

sorry for my delay in replying sam, I'm just getting around checking all my received comments. I've .. read more
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now that is so beautiful and colorful and brings up good memories. Lovely!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carola

2 Years Ago

hi patricia, thanks for reading & commenting. i used the rainbow lorries feather colouring as my poe.. read more
The rhyming is wonderful, and it flows effortlessly! Really beautiful!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Carola

2 Years Ago

thanks karen.
hope it was a surprise discovering towards the end I was writing about a rainb.. read more
KAREN

2 Years Ago

My pleasure!
Nicely done! Love the rhyming couplets and the beautiful, colorful presentation. ~Sharon

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that is truly the greatest kind of friend to have... the one that chooses you, for you:) she obviously knows a fellow flyer when she finds one... dear Carola! I enjoyed this

Posted 4 Years Ago


How wonderful. My daughter was drawing and coloring some beautiful birds just the other day from a nature encyclopedia.

Posted 4 Years Ago


What a beautiful bird you have visiting you carola. Wonderful colours. I am fond myself of our avian friends, but our visitors are not nearly as colourful as the lorikeet. We have mainly robins magpies, blue tits and blackbirds in our area. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love long rambling storytelling poems & this is one of the best I've read from you. You take us thru interesting scenes & details that appeal to the senses. After seeing your photo, tho, I would say your 6th couplet does not do justice to the actual amount of touch here. This verse sounds as if she's only at the "approaching" stage, whereas your picture shows full-on affection. I think you could pump this verse up a bit to show that with more feeling. It must be a total freakin' thrill to touch a wild animal like that! That's the intensity I'd like to feel from your words, too! I realize you're much more stately & reserved than I am, but this is just a nudge into my realm of embellishment! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


I had never heard of a Lorikeet so I looked it up and could see why it deserved its very own poem.
Grossbeaks are about as close to that coloring as we ever get, although there is a red-headed woodpecker about, raiding our hummingbird feeders (?) which is quite colorful.
Luck you

Posted 4 Years Ago


I envy you for having such fabulous opportunities for bird watching. I've looked at some of your photos and have been mightily impressed by all those colorful creatures. We have robins, cardinals, blue jays and hummingbirds, but nothing to compete with your Ms. Rainbow.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carola

2 Years Ago

sorry for my delay in replying sam, I'm just getting around checking all my received comments. I've .. read more
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