~ Animal Sensitivity ~

~ Animal Sensitivity ~

A Poem by Carola
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(Didactic Cinquain)... Disappointment in man's brutish behaviour

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© 2023 Carola


Author's Note

Carola
i'm trying my hand at a Didactic Cinquain which refers to a word count & not syllables & stresses, & so would be easier to write.

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I have (well I had) two charities a year that I cater for one of them is a wildlife rehabilitation center and the other is an animal rescue shelter if you saw first hand some of the results of humanities abuse of animals it would make you absolutely heartbroken:(

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carola

4 Years Ago

no robert it wouldn't surprise me, & it makes me so angry. 😡
i sign on average 3 - 5 onli.. read more



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I have (well I had) two charities a year that I cater for one of them is a wildlife rehabilitation center and the other is an animal rescue shelter if you saw first hand some of the results of humanities abuse of animals it would make you absolutely heartbroken:(

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carola

4 Years Ago

no robert it wouldn't surprise me, & it makes me so angry. 😡
i sign on average 3 - 5 onli.. read more
Seems we can't even handle the rescue part properly
A box type van carrying rescued dogs from Mexico to Canada crashed
I think 18(?) of 40 (?) died and quite a few are missing in whatever desert condition.
But they were being driven across the desert, in an unventilated space, all stacked in tight cages
Does that sound like a rescue?

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carola

4 Years Ago

no it sure doesn't.
i'm thinking sometimes rescuers are so focused on rescuing, they neglec.. read more
Dear Carola, we have a cat and a dog. Our family love our pets, they are part of our family. When our pets have died, we really mourn them. Your didactic cinquain reminds me of what I read in the paper frequently. Cruelty to animals and abandonment. I ask myself, how can anyone treat a living creature in this way. And then I turn to the meat markets in China and freeze. That says it all. Thought provoking brevity. Keep safe and well.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carola

4 Years Ago

i totally agree with what you've said. (i get violent thoughts of how i would like to go & get a cri.. read more
Life as we live it ...seldom as we want it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carola

4 Years Ago

very true chris
as much and as often as pets are mistreated, man mistreats his own far too often.
Sensitivity and love are dreadfully lacking.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Carola

4 Years Ago

yes it makes one wonder about that.
cheerio carola

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Added on March 30, 2020
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