~ Colours ~

Trying my hand at an ACROSTIC poem.

Author's Note

'colours' spelt the English way !!

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Carola... colours of the Rainbow are moods of
flowers in our soul... where violets grow... and daffodils sing.
Where we never grow old... and stars fall like gentle Rain
where Green fields of eternity await at Heaven's golden Gate.
Your poetry has touched my heart where Pardon is my reward.
truly, Pat

[Carola]

wow patricia, your comment is a poem in itself !
thanks for stopping by to read & review. i was trying my hand at an acrostic style.
cheerio carola

[Patricia Wedel]

Hi Carola... there are times that I do review poems with lines that rhyme.... because that is how I can express my feelings about a poem. I am not into styles, but I love to read certain styles that other poets present so well. But never say never. truly, Pat

[poetgurl]

This is so wonderful, love the use of the colors you used to write this. Very creative write.

[Carola]

thanks for stopping by to read & comment

[barleygirl]

I love the English spelling becuz you get an extra line (I'm always looking for more lines!) I haven't done an acrostic in a long time & this makes me want to do some. Thanks for the inspiration. As a recovering engineer (in my other life) I can appreciate the precision that you use in your way of seeing the world & sharing what you see. Just enuf technicality to make it interesting, but not making anyone's eyes glaze over! This is a well-done acrostic with your signature stamp on it (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Carola]

wow margie, i don't think i've ever inspired anyone before, i feel quite chuffed !

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love that spelling of Colours....
well done acrostic...i am not much into form poems, and seldom write them, except for this form, haiku and senryu....
we can also colour our lives artistically....writers tend to do that...we paint with words...
j.

[Carola]

thanks jacob for stopping by to read & comment.
yes i like haiku too, though i find it difficult to be short & succinct
cheerio carola