Blissed Time

          "Blissed Time"

With my eyes closed I reminisce  

How you used to stroke my arms...

Up and down, toying with my fingers

And hand, looking my lines of love;

Siding your warm cheek with my palms,

As you closed your eyes at my touch;

How you would pull me, and hold me

Into your arms with contentment;

My ear listening on your chest 

To the heart's rhythm of my warrior.

As you inhaled scent of my hair

I felt our bodies' flesh as one  

- Of you and I eternal lovers -

My unforgettable blissed time!

© - Carol Phelan Aebby  

Reviews

[armin]

The second half of the poem was killer and a pleasure to read.
I liked this well crafted poem filled beauty, passion and sweet wordings.
And you have a nice name 'Carol' remembered me of classic actress Carol Dempster.

Keep up the good work .

Spidey. ...

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

Thank you Poet!

Your words are treasured.

With respect and smiles,
read moreThank you Poet!

Your words are treasured.

With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh........what a lucky man he is. ..oh........what a lucky gal she is!

Regards,
Al

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Wonderfully and sweetly romantic ... Is it not a clear sign to all that the finest moments of this life are those spent madly and helplessly in love? ...No achievement of prowess, position, or money, can ever match moments such as these ...

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

Thank you Poet!

I agree with you. Love is the beginning and the end all that comes between is survival.

Sending you smiles by the trillions...

Carol Phelan Aebby

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts. You said a lot in the short poetry.
"As you inhaled scent of my hair
I felt our bodies' flesh as one
- Of you and I eternal lovers -
My unforgettable blissed time!"
The above lines could stand on their own. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

Thank you Poet!

With respect and appreciation,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Blissed time indeed, Carol Phelan Aebby! So passioante and romantic! Loved it!☺

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

Thank you Poet!

Your gracious words are treasured.

With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[Roshan Nair]

Really beautiful piece Carol. I love the intimacy progression as you've gone on with the poem.
Cheers! :)

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

Thank you Poet!

With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[ANTO]

Bittersweet Carol, the time you describe is truly lovely but its all set int the past tense which makes me feel that all did not go 'happily ever after', which makes me sad that it came to an end. The term 'my warrior' as moonskittles highlighted is really special - i think it is lovely to call anyone my anything - my wee bug for example or my wee bubbles - lovely little things to say.

Thank you for the romance - not much of it about lately...

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

Thank you Poet!

Your gracious words are treasured!

I wrote an article on despair once, and the readers took it personally. I had offers of love, help shoulders, hearts, souls and I was overwhelmed with replying. Then one Lord Poet stepped in with these words which brought instant relief!

"A Poet may express her/his natural emotions, the intergalactic wonders, or serve as an interpreter for what is possible to exist, could have existed or exists around her/his perception."

Smiles galore to a natural charmer!

Carol Phelan Aebby

[Jamestown]

So peaceful, and sweet. Thanks for sharing and be blessed.

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

Thank you Poet!

Wishing you creativity and bliss!

With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[~]

A very blissful poem sweet carol. I loved the alluding of a warrior. Well done!!

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

Thank you Poet!

Your lovely presence and words are treasured!

With respect and smiles galore,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[~]

Thank you for the smiles - I will take those any time