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Reviews

[Ken Collins]

Wow, this is such a radical example of it's own structure! You used words in a way I have never before seen/read. A message is in there, like all art, but you made the words art in itself by how you arranged them. The form reminds me of an eye test... but it really is a reality check for our brains because us silly humans are always freaking out about every little thing that goes wrong in day to day life. Nice work. Very different!

[T. J. Blackburn]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOO......I think I love you.

[Binary Canary]

I read it over and over again. Back and forth. It's all true.

[Jennifer]

This was so cool. I really enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed looking at it. Very good.

[Mangie]

Sweet poem...the title is perfect for it!

[Greg the Bard]

I am remind of the Bit Nic eara with a guy on bongos beating what he will while the young girl draped in black stands at a microphone reading her poem. 0 divided into 0 = nothing. Right! I've follow your writings here from the day I started with the Cafe. Interesting is not a word I like to use but yours is interesting. I don't believe I can withstand the DaDaism's as yet but I do read them the best I can. I do that because I respect you. Thanks Your Freind Gary

[Shaunta R. Edwards]

I really love it...alot haven't seen much of anything like it totally original

[~love Junkie~]

that is soo cool how you did your poem like that. i see it its all about reflection, very good.

[Arc]

Hmm, interesting. On Earth as it is in Heaven ...? (I wish I could remember the Mayan's -- maybe the Inca's -- much earlier version of this). I don't know what else to say that already has not been said ... so how are you? =]

Seriously, the mirror-to-the-world may very well be holding itself up.

*giggle*

Arc

[Amanda]

Very unique! I love the repetition of letters and capitalization, like spelling it REALL. The mix of capital letters really plays with the rhythm and understand as you read it. I especially like that it's built to play on the idea of a vision test chart. Absolutely fascinating...

[Lindsey Keever]

I love the originality. It really reminds me of ee cummings, one of my favorite poets. Keep it coming!!!