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Reviews

[Ken Collins]

Wow, this is such a radical example of it's own structure! You used words in a way I have never before seen/read. A message is in there, like all art, but you made the words art in itself by how you arranged them. The form reminds me of an eye test... but it really is a reality check for our brains because us silly humans are always freaking out about every little thing that goes wrong in day to day life. Nice work. Very different!

[Ghost]

Very well done, I loved the format. If you dont mind my asking, how did you do this. I cant even get my poetry centered on the page, yet you have it inverted. lol. Very well done

[Coolwhip30]

i love the ceativity here its a blessing to see individuality in poetry today its very uplifting

[Michelle Scott]

I like out you did that. It's good so see something different and creative for a change. Good work.

[Anata]

Very original! nice thoughts and expressions, and great ways of working out!

[An Ordinary Woman]

Im not sure how you did that, but I really like it alot!! Its the most creative thing I have seen!

Very very cool. !

[Nothing.]

Wow, that's a really awesome idea. The words and look of it just give me a mental image of some world were everything is backwards or forwards but it doesn't really matter, because everything is right. :]

[David]

I dig the creativity of this.

[Paul McCracken]

This is flippin' awesome!!

[David Lefleur]

Carol Maric
Is clever and talented and I said it so it must be true. No?

[kevin walls]

holy s**t, wow taken to the max in originality and possible abstractness, i love the jambled random meaning through either precise or haphazard placing of certain letters words of figures, i like this i like trying to figure out if there's something deeper than what shows good job, and i keep asking myself how the hell did you flip the letters?


anyway good job
10 originality
6 meaning