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A Poem by Carol Maric

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© 2008 Carol Maric


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Wow, this is such a radical example of it's own structure! You used words in a way I have never before seen/read. A message is in there, like all art, but you made the words art in itself by how you arranged them. The form reminds me of an eye test... but it really is a reality check for our brains because us silly humans are always freaking out about every little thing that goes wrong in day to day life. Nice work. Very different!

Posted 17 Years Ago


22 of 22 people found this review constructive.




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Poems and anti-poems through the looking glass. I love your Protean series, I wonder did you tie the old man down on this one?
I would prefer this without the inversion but then again subjectively I don't even exist.
BOSco TM.



Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 15 people found this review constructive.

Interesting piece. I like it. Annette

Posted 17 Years Ago


13 of 15 people found this review constructive.

This work of art/philosophy blows my mind. I have never experienced such a strange work before.

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 15 people found this review constructive.

the poem captures every angle of your belief. somehow i felt trapped reading it. suffocated somewhere in the space between type and mirror type with no other possible belief but yours.

nice.

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 15 people found this review constructive.

Wow!It's really cool.

Posted 17 Years Ago


12 of 15 people found this review constructive.

this is really creavite! and i really liked this! what an eye catcher! great job! keep writing, i will read!

be blessed!

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 15 people found this review constructive.

You should have entered my "Creativity" contest! You would have won first prize!
R.



Posted 17 Years Ago


14 of 14 people found this review constructive.

A poem, an eyechart, and a work of art all in one! Very unique and original!
Hats off to a new innovator!

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 15 people found this review constructive.

This is the most unique style i've ever read, and I love it. It is short, but this creative idea around a creative style is what makes me think: "Does it happen like that?"

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 15 people found this review constructive.

This is a refreshing look at the idea "everything happens for a reason."

An idea I accept and reject and accept again.

Posted 17 Years Ago


17 of 17 people found this review constructive.


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Carol Maric
Carol Maric

And then went down to the ship, Set keel to breakers, forth on the godly sea, and . . . Ezra Pound (TCOEP).



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" My life goal? Literary Immortality--without compromise. " " I would rather be skydiving while writing a book. " philosopher & polymath Author of the unpublished masterpiece PROTEAN NotUnTit.. more..

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