Wow, this is such a radical example of it's own structure! You used words in a way I have never before seen/read. A message is in there, like all art, but you made the words art in itself by how you arranged them. The form reminds me of an eye test... but it really is a reality check for our brains because us silly humans are always freaking out about every little thing that goes wrong in day to day life. Nice work. Very different!
Our mistakes are mirrored reflections of ourselves or merely a matter of perspective. There is no such thing as a mistake only an opportunity to be reborn into the beauty that is ourself. There is no right or wrong only what is was and will be. The piece works. HB
Some people make paintings of thigs they see when listening to music(kandinsky).Your poetry is very visual as its put to paper almost like you're writing whilst listening to musicgreat expressionandy
Interesting. You have a unique way of writing. Though this reminded me of going to an eye doctor or something to have them check your eyes. I liked this, it was very original and different. Keep up the good work.
I know I've probably told you this before, but your work is unique to the point that I just don't know what to make of it. It's cool, no doubt, but I just can't get anything from it. It's no fault of yours, I just can't get into the abstract stuff like this. This particular piece I find interesting because it reminds me of those eye test posters they have on the wall at the optomo-guy-doctor-place, and they tell you to cover one eye and read the letters starting at the top. Anyway, that's what this looked like to me at first. Then I noticed the mirror effect and that's pretty cool. I really dig the creativity. I guess your work is more artistic than what I'm used to, and that's neat. I'd like to blow this up and hang it on my wall like a poster, if that's alright with you. I'm sure my friends would start asking questions and I could send them your way. Anyway, great creative piece.
Yah. That's different. I love the mirror effect and am sure there's something between the lines here; especially with those garbled words. So it's worth some contemplation and a second read.
And then went down to the ship, Set keel to breakers, forth on the godly sea, and . . . Ezra Pound (TCOEP).
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