DaDaLust

PROTEAN NotUnTitled: The Philosophical Cantos / Canto I / WaitHereEyeSolAtes Cantos (III) . . . Nota Bene: This book is my Inferno. [not about or inspired by the Dadaist movement]

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED - Do not reproduce without the author's permission--Links OK.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is more than art. This is pure fun. This is what covering your jean backed notebook is all about, it's like the inventor of the peace sign using the semaphore letters N and D for nuclear disarmament then inverting it and drawing a circle around it. Pure fun and it makes people scratch their heads because they are wondering what fun is. lol

[P. Knight]

I truly feel like I was on a temporary trip reading this...I dug your poem and I love the style. It is definately unique and very Hunter Thompson like.

[Crystal Elisa]

funky... i dig

[Nightmare]

ha wow.
this is mental . but i lovee it .
its awesome
and

" i am my own LSD , i think therefore i go insane "

great

=]

x

[Michael Carr]

ciukdn;t finish this, nice rhytm, but the style grows old after too long.
Like what you did, just didn't get into it.

[Memnoch]

I thought this was really cool! Very artistic. I like how it went up and down and all around. Very Cool. Thanks for sharring. I might have to try this sometime myself.
Kelley Frost

[TL Boehm]

reminds me of ee cummings and ginsberg and plath all rolled into one. wonderful poem.

[Crazy Cat Man]

wow this is a fantastic origianl piece. I love it. :)

[J. G. Gabriel]

FANTSTIC!

You suceeded in two areas!
-Writting a perfect poem
-And, Creating a whole new style!

I'm really in awe... and I don't believe i've ever said that to another poet.

[Lyra]

I think I was strating to see the words move while I read them. It must have taken ages to write as it looks so compilcated and meserising at the same time.

I think this is a poem that I am going to need to re-read a few times before it clicks into place.
although, in some way, that may be the point.
"I think therefore I go insane" we read it and become insane ourselves.

[Joy C.]

This had a kind of exotic rhythmmical noise to it, it was both difficult to read and addicting, because you were looking for something fimiliar to relate to. Very mesmerizing and awesome piece. Great work!