DaDaLust

DaDaLust

A Poem by Carol Maric
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PROTEAN NotUnTitled: The Philosophical Cantos / Canto I / WaitHereEyeSolAtes Cantos (III) . . . Nota Bene: This book is my Inferno. [not about or inspired by the Dadaist movement]

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© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED - Do not reproduce without the author's permission--Links OK.

© 2009 Carol Maric


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This is more than art. This is pure fun. This is what covering your jean backed notebook is all about, it's like the inventor of the peace sign using the semaphore letters N and D for nuclear disarmament then inverting it and drawing a circle around it. Pure fun and it makes people scratch their heads because they are wondering what fun is. lol

Posted 17 Years Ago


16 of 16 people found this review constructive.




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Hey no joke. I dont understand this and I want to. It is very cool but I need help translating! maybe you can help me.

Posted 17 Years Ago


17 of 21 people found this review constructive.

Wow, that's really interesting! It reminds me of computer code.

Posted 17 Years Ago


16 of 20 people found this review constructive.

I am my own LSD... I began to wonder whether you might have been on LSD when you did this. Not because it's bad. No, it's actually quite good. Just because it's very... odd... And long. It could be that I have no skill with cryptic poetry.

Posted 17 Years Ago


16 of 20 people found this review constructive.

I am not done with this by a stretch, well done!

Posted 17 Years Ago


15 of 22 people found this review constructive.

A lesson in cryptic for those who dare.
Quite an experience. Thank you.

Posted 17 Years Ago


17 of 22 people found this review constructive.

This is like some beautiful Chinese PuzzleBox. I want so badly to say something profouond about it but I'm stuck at "brilliant" and "unique". So that will just have to do.

Posted 17 Years Ago


19 of 25 people found this review constructive.

This is one of the most absoultely fabulous pieces of work I have stumbled across in a LONG time. There are so many angles and aspects to it, that you can not just read it once and say that you understand it. You have to read it again and again and again until you go literally insane before you can truly grasp this poem in its entirety. I am in love with this poem. It is one of my favorites. Great job.

Posted 17 Years Ago


21 of 25 people found this review constructive.

I love this , my eyes are smiling.. love it .. art !

Peace

Posted 17 Years Ago


19 of 25 people found this review constructive.

Well. it's not an easy read, and I think it would maybe work with a Greek Chorus or multi-media assistance, but I LOVE IT! A GREAT example of concrete poetry, words within words, scrabble-like links, a plethora of meanings... To read this is to EMBRACE the insanity!

I get frustrated trying to maintain my formats in venues like this + usually just give up (sigh...). I guess one has to suffer for his or her art...

Posted 17 Years Ago


21 of 24 people found this review constructive.

You know, you could very well make a comic with this.
Ck

Posted 17 Years Ago


19 of 26 people found this review constructive.


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Carol Maric
Carol Maric

And then went down to the ship, Set keel to breakers, forth on the godly sea, and . . . Ezra Pound (TCOEP).



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