DaDaLust

PROTEAN NotUnTitled: The Philosophical Cantos / Canto I / WaitHereEyeSolAtes Cantos (III) . . . Nota Bene: This book is my Inferno. [not about or inspired by the Dadaist movement]

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED - Do not reproduce without the author's permission--Links OK.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is more than art. This is pure fun. This is what covering your jean backed notebook is all about, it's like the inventor of the peace sign using the semaphore letters N and D for nuclear disarmament then inverting it and drawing a circle around it. Pure fun and it makes people scratch their heads because they are wondering what fun is. lol

[James Johnson]

All I can say Carol is...interesting and unusual. I didn't get it due to all the wild characters. It left me kind of...dumbfounded.

On a bright note, you get an "A" for originality!

[Felipe Guerrero]

all i could say is "unique"

[Richard Hartshorn]

yes, interesting. I definitely wouldn't call this a "poem", perse', but it's definitely an experience trying to read the thing.

What I DID like, however, was how the entire setup is sort of a reflection of the opening line "I am my own LSD." Just looking at it is a reflection of that.

[L. L. Jacobson]

interesting.....

[JP thinks the WC is apt..]

I think if you were to paint this on to canvas it would look right at home on the wall of a gallery. I must admit, I didn't understand it but it's very interesting - like the workings of a scrambled or drug induced mind.

[Kevin]

I have to admit this is beyond me as well! Still a work of art but perhaps modern, even neo-modern. I can't rate something I don't understand though. It would only sully your art.

[C Lee]

In all fairness, this is over my head. I just don't get it. But, true to my word, I like to comment none the less. I thought I could understand it, but not so much. I read it several times to see what I could come up with. I like a lot of the infinite words but as a whole, it's rather confusing...perhaps that's the point?!

[Ross Davison]

Ah yeh ah yeh!!!
just plain good.
mmmmm, got dada?

[Joe A]

Very Gertrude Stein (or cummings). Brilliant!

[Tedefroberts]

A cursory examination won't do with this piece...I loved the artistic, Beat Poet presentation...maybe (in my inconsequential opinion) may be a touch too busy. I enjoyed it other than that and applaude your creativity!