DaDaLust

PROTEAN NotUnTitled: The Philosophical Cantos / Canto I / WaitHereEyeSolAtes Cantos (III) . . . Nota Bene: This book is my Inferno. [not about or inspired by the Dadaist movement]

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

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Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is more than art. This is pure fun. This is what covering your jean backed notebook is all about, it's like the inventor of the peace sign using the semaphore letters N and D for nuclear disarmament then inverting it and drawing a circle around it. Pure fun and it makes people scratch their heads because they are wondering what fun is. lol

[Matt Wedlock]

damn mad, the unescapable madness of this story/poem/?, permeates throughout my mind for the entire day, i sit through my seminar of the Brontes mixing up words and breaking apart the english language, a third eye almost comes to mind as I read this. I felt as if I was listening to Maynard as he babbled his genious madness in "Rosetta stoned". It was a great exploration and something altogether different. A one time trip though i must say. one of those deals, all i kept thinking was "DAD.LIAM.I THINK THEREFORE I AM MY OWN LSD." i know thats not what you are trying to accomplish but it just stuck out at me from my own memory.
peace
matt

p.s. slightly reminiscent of one of Ginsbergs on LSD i forget which one but reminded me of it...

[~kimberley~]

DaDa may not be as it appears, I was thinking in reference to a lullaby, not a "dad" but what do I know here?!

[Inmate 72866]

There is a lot of pain in this poem. DADA LUST? I feel like a psychic trying to read your mind. Something bad has happened. You dedicated another to your Father and Dada is of course a familiar for father. Rage alive, demon dead. Grief? Hatred? Both? Sylvia Plath, "Panzer man, f**k you daddy, I'm through."

[Colin Ingram]

My head just blew up!!! I couldn't follow this to be honest; without doubt you are a very hard poet to clamp on and digest; your inaccessibility is at once challenging and disconcerting, because I really lost my way in this; it's no mean feat to be this original, it was just for my pea-sized intellect, too much - hahaha; was it a Dada nihilist tone, or a wordplay trickster at large; a philosophical conundrum or a joke on the reader??? - I honestly don't know, I couldn't finish it and I apologise for that, I found it very hard to follow. Also kudos to your 'creativity and boldness'; original and very complex *faints*!!

[A. Highly. Addictive. S..]

Wow! Well, this was definitely a challenging piece to get through. I must admit that I had a hard time understanding it the way it is laid out and made. BUT, that does not take anything away from it. I still find it overwhelmingly fascinating. Only a truly gifted mind could come up with something such as this. Kudos to you for your creativity and boldness to be different. This is an absolute picture of words. I will continue to read your other works, hoping not only to figure out your "code," but to continue to be amazed.

[Este]

very visually captivating and amazing transformation of the english language. this is easily one the most interesting things i've seen in a while...unfortunately, i can't figure out what it's about.

[The Guerrilla Warhol]

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EyeM sew (ATTILAthe)HunORIGINall.

[Avoiry]

wow takes a bit of thought but very very impressive i love the visual aspect of the work makes it that much more entertaining

[Christian Jensen]

I have read through a few of your poems now and I am both excited and a massed

did you mention that you sing some of these ? I am not sure if I have deciphered yet the way you intend these to be read, if there is one singular way of intention, which there might not be, but there is so many ways and mixtures of words that entwine that it is a v isual delight to journey through them. dadamemonodaemonnomad. your work makes me want to share and write some more of my fuse-y-fom poems

I am thoroughly delighted to have found your writing

[Moonlight]

You may already know this *smirk*

Your mind paintings are the best!

You paint your word art with passion, I love each piece!

Moonlight.