DaDaLust

PROTEAN NotUnTitled: The Philosophical Cantos / Canto I / WaitHereEyeSolAtes Cantos (III) . . . Nota Bene: This book is my Inferno. [not about or inspired by the Dadaist movement]

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED - Do not reproduce without the author's permission--Links OK.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is more than art. This is pure fun. This is what covering your jean backed notebook is all about, it's like the inventor of the peace sign using the semaphore letters N and D for nuclear disarmament then inverting it and drawing a circle around it. Pure fun and it makes people scratch their heads because they are wondering what fun is. lol

[Ebby]

My brain completely freaked out trying to read this!
I just couldn't handle it.
It looks beautiful though, really beautiful and a small part of me thinks that by not reading it and viewing it as a canvas, I can appreciate it in a less educated way.

I adored "walking on edgeshells".

[Ashly Christen]

woa, i got so lost, it was like a puzzle, its genius, ow kinda hurt my head
ima have to read it again
crazy cook
i dont even know what to say about it
it was like a racing mind
my own racing mind
someone elses racing thoughts
jumbled
dissarranged
lost
code
art
!!!!
♥

[S . Maurer]

Wild on the post-modern panache, but the formatting is beyond solid.

[Roy Jacobs]

Dadaism in Poetry? To cool I hadn't even thought about that at all. you learn new stuff everyday!

[Jake Hajer]

Reminds me of Allen Ginsberg...good stuff

[L. Christopher Bird]

Reminds me of some dadaist/beat poetry I tried in high school but taken to the nth degree. This is some great work.

I've had some trouble with formatting on the few things I have posted, any tips?

[Gandré]

Carol, you genius! ur amazing!!
My god what an artist you are.
I'm deeply touched. This is the most wonderful, brilliant, optic non sense with
the deepest message I have ever read. I love it! also your arrogance
within this piece - you have right to be so. brilliant ppl are just arrogant.
what a literary juggler you are! it is the most intelligent poem i have ever readed
with the strongest amount of messages i can derive...

[.]

silly willy

[Ryan Horvath]

experimentally awesome. poetry is an acquired taste. or. there's a style for everyone. I dug this. Thanks for sharing.

[Jeff Brown]

It seems like you spent quite a bit of time working on this so I don't mean to sound harsh--that is I appreciate what you are trying to do, and the work you put into it--but this to me is like conceptual art. The concept may be very deep and creative, but the actual execution is too esoteric and detached. It is not fun to read. Just not my cup of tea, but oh well.