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Reviews

[Gandré]

hey !

thx for stepping by and reading that small piece Times.
Hope your world is smiling at you,

ciao, lara

[Pema Dorje]

wow, carol... my wounded reason was bleeding all over this... with SUPPHeRing eRotiic PowwAreFilled ... this dissonanced my neurons to the flower of happenstance meaning ...

[Blackbirdsong]

Your poetry is art both lyricially and graphically. You weave thoughts and images like no one else I have ever seen.

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I'm not sure what goes on in the layouts of your pieces... it's original I guess.. but makes the poem quite difficult to read... That kind of works against you on here.. because I want to read and review as many pieces as I can on here... not spend 3 hours deciphering one poem

On the other hand.. If I owned one of your poetry books.. I would be more inclined to spend time pondering over it..
good.. from what I could make of it? :}
x

[Brett Campaigne]

how long?

[Gandré]

hello carol ! i was here my dear. but it didn t show anything? error ? I was here again. ha ha. Now I wrote about this in your comment section. Enjoyed very much. congrat!! hug.

luv, lara

[Greg the Bard]

I still haven't caught on altogether when read this type style. It is very hard for me to understand. I can see the flow and find it easy but the style interfears with that flow. I will never stop trying to understand your style. You have been so good to me in my learning and believe I will never forget that. Your Dear Friend Gary