Because Of . . .

Because Of . . .

Local Airwaves Dormant Days Were Forced To

Withdraw

Consulting Renderings Of . . .

Broad Banned

Connection Monitored Confluence Of . . .
Signings And Parcel Bombings At Best Of . . .
All Places Legendary--Wall Paintings Of . . .

(Confidence) Everything From “Reality”

Names Would Be Additional Process, Carved
Picture Palpable, Dispelling Widowed Orphans
Whose Mothers Show Progress Meeting
Demands Started Decaydes Ago

Intriguing Widest Release Of . . .

Siblings

Darken Settlements Overloaded Behind
Strong Performances Of . . .

Immune Interest

Ameliorated, The Speaker Returned Airporting
Touch Downs In Ceremonial Gesture Research

So Ubiquitous, That Drift Supports Seconds
Left Of . . .

The Early Momentum Path Past Profits

No Sobering Of . . .

Your Head’s Droning Cells Phone
No Doubt For Its Executive Calls
Its Decision Of . . .

Possession At The Center:

Residents’ Testimony Of . . .
Greater Watt Age Colleagues Of . . .
Second Study Of . . .
First Language Anatomy Of . . .
Monumental Effort Of . . .
Conscripted Wounded Living Legends Of . . .

Weight Lifting.

© Carol Maric
All Rights Reserved

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

Reviews

[Hawksmoor]

I won't lie to you...although this is very well done, in its construction and execution, not to mention a completely unique style, it went totally over my head. LOL. Gimme a while to think and wake up, maybe have a drink, and then I'll be back to give it another shot. By the way, you and I used to talk a lot, read each other a lot. What happened to that, may I ask?

Hawksmoor...From The Bleed.

[Jenni Meredith]

Thickly layered with double entendre this poem engages the reader at many levels.

I enjoy puns and synonyms yet there is that famous quote about them being an anathema to poetry.

I shall have to find it. It is a quote I remember to forget as I too love wordplay and I agree with your viewpoint, (implied by your language use here), that layering meaning gives the lines more, not less, impact.
Your "broad banned" for example, is wonderfully succinct. and your "Meeting Demands Started Decaydes Ago."

I love to read these verbal acrobatics and make my mind work to squeeze out all the meaning.

[Jenni Meredith]

Thickly layered with double entendre this poem engages the reader at many levels.

I enjoy puns and synonyms yet there is that famous quote about them being an anathema to poetry.

I shall have to find it. It is a quote I remember to forget as I too love wordplay and I agree with your viewpoint, (implied by your language use here), that layering meaning gives the lines more, not less, impact.
Your "broad banned" for example, is wonderfully succinct. and your "Meeting Demands Started Decaydes Ago."

I love to read these verbal acrobatics and make my mind work to squeeze out all the meaning.

[Nat Z. Punx]

maybe because of tuesday... your comments won't be pushed so far right

[Yvonne Horton]

The feeling I receive from this poem reflects my sense of the overwhelming current events that take place in our world on a day-to-day basis and the suppression of these events I experience due to my hectic life. The ellipsis following lines is like a smattering of consciousness of what I am aware of or what I have heard through media as words that stream through my ears, to leave only key points that adhere to my thoughts. The format as right justified is relative to the fact that while I am aware that these events are important, they remain as secondary in my mind, though they should take precedence as priorities to survival.

This comment is, of course, just my personal interpretation. The poem is excellent.

[Ennovy]

life, truth. emotions, seep thoughts are all paet of this very vivid read. Totally awesome....Novy

[Mary Elizabeth Meade St..]

Very intriguing and thought provoking piece that you have penned here! superb imagery! Fabulous flow! Thoroughly enjoyed it! Thanks so much for sharing! Looking forward to reading more of your work!
Peace~~
Mary

[Maggie Smith]

Interesting and different. A testimony to the contemporary world.
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ORIGINAL!

[Tylernol]

I've never seen anything like this.

I'm intrigued...

[Michael Carr]

Nice refreshing piece, different and more lyrical. well done.

[Crystal Elisa]

I love when people break from form...good write