Because Of . . .

Because Of . . .

Local Airwaves Dormant Days Were Forced To

Withdraw

Consulting Renderings Of . . .

Broad Banned

Connection Monitored Confluence Of . . .
Signings And Parcel Bombings At Best Of . . .
All Places Legendary--Wall Paintings Of . . .

(Confidence) Everything From “Reality”

Names Would Be Additional Process, Carved
Picture Palpable, Dispelling Widowed Orphans
Whose Mothers Show Progress Meeting
Demands Started Decaydes Ago

Intriguing Widest Release Of . . .

Siblings

Darken Settlements Overloaded Behind
Strong Performances Of . . .

Immune Interest

Ameliorated, The Speaker Returned Airporting
Touch Downs In Ceremonial Gesture Research

So Ubiquitous, That Drift Supports Seconds
Left Of . . .

The Early Momentum Path Past Profits

No Sobering Of . . .

Your Head’s Droning Cells Phone
No Doubt For Its Executive Calls
Its Decision Of . . .

Possession At The Center:

Residents’ Testimony Of . . .
Greater Watt Age Colleagues Of . . .
Second Study Of . . .
First Language Anatomy Of . . .
Monumental Effort Of . . .
Conscripted Wounded Living Legends Of . . .

Weight Lifting.

© Carol Maric
All Rights Reserved

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

Reviews

[Hawksmoor]

I won't lie to you...although this is very well done, in its construction and execution, not to mention a completely unique style, it went totally over my head. LOL. Gimme a while to think and wake up, maybe have a drink, and then I'll be back to give it another shot. By the way, you and I used to talk a lot, read each other a lot. What happened to that, may I ask?

Hawksmoor...From The Bleed.

[Kari [io]]

it is very visually appealing, and seems extreemly intelligent (over my head!) i'm sure if i had a couple of extra hours on my hands, i may be able to somewhat tap the surface of this piece.

[Ilene M.W. Lush]

Whose Mothers Show Progress Meeting
Demands Started Decaydes Ago

Intriguing Widest Release Of . . .

Siblings

2nd review. love this line. your work brings me back. OED in hand.

[Carlos Isaias Ruiz]

Seems like its stream of conscious, yet correlating rhythmic words....but the chosen ideas and vocabulary I don't like.

[Ciao.]

Tapestry of word play. He shivers...needing a blanket.

[Moonlight]

Your poetry is like a muti-media art piece to me...almost tactile in its substance, I am enjoying looking back!

Moonlight.

[Brett Campaigne]

your incredibly involved poetry is laced with details , sometimes being taken in so many directions ina journey can confound... i can never read through just once. Also love the way it rolls off the tongue.

[Scott Casale]

engaging... yet, word. alright.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Wow, excellant topic, not many people would be able to reach the points in a poem as you have!

[Erin Hogan]

the language is..... (trying to think of a good enough word) remarkable.... wow

[Kelly Desilet]

this would be really amazing read aloud. nice words.