Because Of . . .

Because Of . . .

Local Airwaves Dormant Days Were Forced To

Withdraw

Consulting Renderings Of . . .

Broad Banned

Connection Monitored Confluence Of . . .
Signings And Parcel Bombings At Best Of . . .
All Places Legendary--Wall Paintings Of . . .

(Confidence) Everything From “Reality”

Names Would Be Additional Process, Carved
Picture Palpable, Dispelling Widowed Orphans
Whose Mothers Show Progress Meeting
Demands Started Decaydes Ago

Intriguing Widest Release Of . . .

Siblings

Darken Settlements Overloaded Behind
Strong Performances Of . . .

Immune Interest

Ameliorated, The Speaker Returned Airporting
Touch Downs In Ceremonial Gesture Research

So Ubiquitous, That Drift Supports Seconds
Left Of . . .

The Early Momentum Path Past Profits

No Sobering Of . . .

Your Head’s Droning Cells Phone
No Doubt For Its Executive Calls
Its Decision Of . . .

Possession At The Center:

Residents’ Testimony Of . . .
Greater Watt Age Colleagues Of . . .
Second Study Of . . .
First Language Anatomy Of . . .
Monumental Effort Of . . .
Conscripted Wounded Living Legends Of . . .

Weight Lifting.

© Carol Maric
All Rights Reserved

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

Reviews

[Hawksmoor]

I won't lie to you...although this is very well done, in its construction and execution, not to mention a completely unique style, it went totally over my head. LOL. Gimme a while to think and wake up, maybe have a drink, and then I'll be back to give it another shot. By the way, you and I used to talk a lot, read each other a lot. What happened to that, may I ask?

Hawksmoor...From The Bleed.

[Rosa Sophia]

Cool... I wasn't sure where you were going with that, and you certainly surprised me! This is great. You definately have an awesome style. I love how you put "decay" in "decades." This is one of those things I'd have to read over and over again to really absorb. Sometimes its hard for me to catch the meaning at first. (I hope that's just me.) I really liked it, though! Keep writing!

Rosy

[Laura]

wow.

[Lisa Vicious]

Excellent Read!

[Matt Wedlock]

every word has its deep meaning and at the same time the reader does not get lost in the vocabulary , albeit i am well read but some words had me wanting to stretch towards the dictionary, not in a sense that i could not figure out what was going on in the context of the piece, but i wanted to understand everything on your level...at least get into your head a little bit more. great control of words and great job making them count, your wit and sarcasm also pulls me in.
Peace

[Inmate 72866]

"By light inaccessible hid from our eyes..."

[Natanya Bryant]

Your style in this is free... which I like. The deep words and feelings which lie amid the everyday concepts I find beautiful. The tempo which speeds and slows in certain points that I'm guessing you want readers to ponder over combined with its originality makes this poem a particularly intriguing read...

[J. E. Barry]

I loved it! The style you write with, the attention to the composition and each word's relation to the other is extremely interesting to read. The poem itself was abosrbing. I'm not a big poetry buff, but I really enjoyed reading this. It keeps you thinking. You bring the reader right into this train of thought. Great work.

[Carol Maric]

Broadie, sorry, but are you confusing me with someone else? I have been sort of quiet here (comments, messaging) until very recently. : )

[Denise Behrens]

You, unlike many writers, command attention to every word. Your style is very distinctive and thought provoking. No, not provoking. More like thought demanding. It's an overload of modern terminology which creeps inside us and bloats us with lethargy. Well done. (applause)