Because Of . . .

Because Of . . .

Local Airwaves Dormant Days Were Forced To

Withdraw

Consulting Renderings Of . . .

Broad Banned

Connection Monitored Confluence Of . . .
Signings And Parcel Bombings At Best Of . . .
All Places Legendary--Wall Paintings Of . . .

(Confidence) Everything From “Reality”

Names Would Be Additional Process, Carved
Picture Palpable, Dispelling Widowed Orphans
Whose Mothers Show Progress Meeting
Demands Started Decaydes Ago

Intriguing Widest Release Of . . .

Siblings

Darken Settlements Overloaded Behind
Strong Performances Of . . .

Immune Interest

Ameliorated, The Speaker Returned Airporting
Touch Downs In Ceremonial Gesture Research

So Ubiquitous, That Drift Supports Seconds
Left Of . . .

The Early Momentum Path Past Profits

No Sobering Of . . .

Your Head’s Droning Cells Phone
No Doubt For Its Executive Calls
Its Decision Of . . .

Possession At The Center:

Residents’ Testimony Of . . .
Greater Watt Age Colleagues Of . . .
Second Study Of . . .
First Language Anatomy Of . . .
Monumental Effort Of . . .
Conscripted Wounded Living Legends Of . . .

Weight Lifting.

© Carol Maric
All Rights Reserved

© 2007 Carol Maric - Being: The Obsession, Continued . . . A Raging Epidemic !

Reviews

[Hawksmoor]

I won't lie to you...although this is very well done, in its construction and execution, not to mention a completely unique style, it went totally over my head. LOL. Gimme a while to think and wake up, maybe have a drink, and then I'll be back to give it another shot. By the way, you and I used to talk a lot, read each other a lot. What happened to that, may I ask?

Hawksmoor...From The Bleed.

[Lil T]

i love the flow of this. i have read this bottom to top and top to bottom outloud and it sounds so good. thank you for sharing.

[Writes Like A Piece Of ..]

This is brilliant. And I don't know much what else to say about your writing. As I read, I am dumbfounded again and again by your ability to see right to the core of things, say the truths you know and do it all while still writing art and not subcumbing to the pitfall of becoming banal.

[Anna Hays]

Wow extremely creative and very deep in thought. You yourself are truly a great work of art !
I kept reading it over and over get the the complete feel and understanding.
This is a very wonderful write !


Anna

[SensualRoses]

Thought provoking and very deep. All throughout I find my mind takes me in two directions, that of your poem, and off to where your words take me. It's powerful, and well thought out. Great job!

[Crap!]

Yes, it does seem to be omniscient, does it not? But not omnipotent.

[Roy Jacobs]

Such a deep seated sub concious way of writing that again defines a deeper meaning. Technological overload and duking it out in this computerized world. Good going.

[Arlolee]

WOW...I FEEL THE POWER OF YOUR WORDS AND UNFINISHED SENTENCES LEAVING MY MIND IN THOUGHT.........LOVE YOUR FORM OF WRITING....

♥
-ARLOLEE-

[Gary H]

This is a well thought out stream of consciousness; but is that possible? A very imaginative mind such as yours tells me it is. I think this is destined to become a work of art to sit and stare at.

[Erotic Goddess]

You have such a unique style and form. I enjoyed this. Thank you!

[Kelley Bracken - Rainey]

So much here! It's a moving piece. I loved the form and the detail you've given. It's graphic and expresses much!