Lustful Slumber

Lustful Slumber

A Poem by Carlana J.
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Sometimes I will have trouble both falling to sleep and then staying there. So this was inspired by one night of a really bad time.

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At last

Sweet lustful slumber

dissolving into dreamless

longed for escape

 

 

Breath rising and falling

steadfastly marching towards the

promise of a brand new

bright shiny day

 

 

What is pricking at my consicious

the plunking of a

tin piano?

 

How long will it go on

and on and on

 

over and over again

 

pulling at my sweet dreamless escape

 

not another

 

midnight

 

Awakening

© 2011 Carlana J.


Author's Note

Carlana J.
Can you relate? please ignore grammer and spelling, just what do you think of the message? Just wondering...

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Oh boy can I relate! I've been there a while back and let me say I don't care to go there again! Excellent description of insomia!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Carlana J.
Carlana J.

Willow Grove, PA



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I have reciently retired and have rediscovered my passion for writing. Am involved in a writing group in my area, but am always looking to expand. Am married, for 46 years with two wonderful boys. .. more..

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