Remnants of Autocracy

 

 

Not so, out of place,

standing in dress whites,

waving on ragged wagons

and land rovers alike;

shinning skin, so much so

I think he is the sun.

 

Not so, out place,

almost pleasant

but, those shades,

gold rimmed, GOLDEN rims,

blackened lenses,

slanted into the face from top to bottom,

outward to the sky from bottom to top,

the only telltale sign

his fashion. 

 

The fashion

of a thug in a savior's whites

and just as sweetly tongued,

and just as quick with a lash,

always hurry past,

the not so out of place.

Reviews

[Hedra Helix]

so damn cool you need some shades.

man I miss you and your voice.

I love the same line as Zoe. and
slanted into the face from top to bottom,outward to the sky from bottom to top,the only telltale signhis fashion

sigh. what has happened to us?

[Zoe]

I think he is the sun.

oh wow i love that line so much. thats what im talking about with the lines that just hit people smack in the damn head and go YEAH
your voice in this is great, its a writing that takes control of the writer
which i dig
groovy