The Lovers of God

The lovers of God

 

Deep within their souls

Two are formed alike

Riding to the depths

Saving one another

Caring for one another

As their souls combine

They formed one of God's greatest

The lovers of God.

 

These are ones formed by God's intent

Irresistible to their sweet reflect

Opened to the world with open arms

Embracing all children of god's intervention

A loving embrace they can't escape

Ensnared by emotions they've both declared

And as they resonate

Their souls collide.

 

Linking them together

As one forever

But not by love

But by lust

And soon their eyes

Start to tell the lies

Captivated by other lovers

They start to deflect.

 

With time their anger ignites

Soon there is nothing left but lies

As their hatred drive them apart

They start to indulge lust

And resentfully they divide

And there lusts resides

As they fall in love with

The lovers of God.

Author's Note

A poem I needed to write Enjoy! Cant wait on your thoughts!! :) Before you point out the God part if you are a religeos person you should know God lets everything happens for a reason and you learn something from it but it depends what you take from it*

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

this makes me think of ones in love
and then they wrongly go after another
they have a affair and or are infatuated with another
then it turns into lust as lust isn't love it isn't pure love it is
going after someone you can't have.



And soon their eyes

Start to tell the lies

Captivated by other lovers

They start to deflect.




Thank you for sharing this piece and
for your lovely review and comments
you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Any time and thank you for this amazing review Really appreciate it! :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. thank you I enjoyed the read. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Brook]

So beautiful, and passionate. I really love this, the pictures really go with the piece too.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Ncwaa you have my thanks for such a great review :)

[Sami Khalil]

This was a good write. I really enjoyed it...Bravo.................

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you for reading :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............................

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I had to read again for the energy and the want and need of the poem.
"And soon there eyes
Start to tell the lies
Captivated by other lovers
They start to deflect."
You held me to the last word. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry,
Coyote

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hey man thanks reading and I'm grateful that you enjoyed it :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Such a very passionate, and intense write, of true love you conveyed here Carl, I enjoyed this very much. In this world it's important to hold on strong to the "love" inside of us, all, before it's too late, and it will be destroyed, by all kind of distractions. I can see the strong inspiration you gained while you took a break, and it's nice to be back for a bit and read you. :)

- Elisa x

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Awesome review!! Thanks a million and yeah the break was all i needed hehe

Breaks do a human being more than good once in a while, very healthy... you and me know lol I definitely need mine once in a while. You are so welcome... always Carl, I will come by for more, within time... :) you are always in my thoughts bro.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

And you in mine :) Have a lovely evening!

Aw, thank you so much, you too :) :) I'm watching the Transformers... the last one lol ^^

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Ncwaaa Totally Jealous !! :( lol

Ha ha.... ;) I knew it... lol

[A. Amos]

This was a passionate write and a poetic story, truly enjoyed the read buddy. Well done!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

mY Thanks!! A little time off and new environment changes your whole perspective :)