The Lovers of God

The lovers of God

 

Deep within their souls

Two are formed alike

Riding to the depths

Saving one another

Caring for one another

As their souls combine

They formed one of God's greatest

The lovers of God.

 

These are ones formed by God's intent

Irresistible to their sweet reflect

Opened to the world with open arms

Embracing all children of god's intervention

A loving embrace they can't escape

Ensnared by emotions they've both declared

And as they resonate

Their souls collide.

 

Linking them together

As one forever

But not by love

But by lust

And soon their eyes

Start to tell the lies

Captivated by other lovers

They start to deflect.

 

With time their anger ignites

Soon there is nothing left but lies

As their hatred drive them apart

They start to indulge lust

And resentfully they divide

And there lusts resides

As they fall in love with

The lovers of God.

Author's Note

A poem I needed to write Enjoy! Cant wait on your thoughts!! :) Before you point out the God part if you are a religeos person you should know God lets everything happens for a reason and you learn something from it but it depends what you take from it*

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

this makes me think of ones in love
and then they wrongly go after another
they have a affair and or are infatuated with another
then it turns into lust as lust isn't love it isn't pure love it is
going after someone you can't have.



And soon their eyes

Start to tell the lies

Captivated by other lovers

They start to deflect.




Thank you for sharing this piece and
for your lovely review and comments
you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Any time and thank you for this amazing review Really appreciate it! :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. thank you I enjoyed the read. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

[aLittlePain]

Nicely done the form certainly helps to create atmosphere.
Souls colliding is a beautiful description of deep meaningful long lasting love. Anything other is temporary at best. Passionately written with conviction I can appreciate that. R xo

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you for reading!

[ReedWrite]

I enjoyed this poem, Carl. It is true that when God unites two souls, the bond is deeper...they are tied with love. When the bond is nothing but lust, it cannot last. I am not sure I believe in true love...love that lasts a lifetime...but some do. Some find it. I hope you're one of the lucky few. Great poem, and I loved the visuals and font creativity, as well.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you so much for reading and the awesome review! :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Captivated by other lovers

They start to deflect.



With time their anger ignites"

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This is full of energy and passion, especially with the twist from love to lust which I wasn't expecting in the beginning lines. Excellent write!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you for reading :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The way this transforms and goes back again...in the write...
I see the beginning the testimony seems to be love ---
only to fall apart for some reason(s) and finds itself again...
may be not with the same person(s) -- but a different partner...
in doing so finds love in its truer form...
with that person...just how life is at times...

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you man for your awesome review :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[TL Boehm]

Well penned, I liked the cyclical aspect of this - falling in love, and out of love to fall in love again. Nicely done.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thanks lovely for an awesome review :)

[John Preston]

I would believe this a true story
as for god, well who can say.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Like they say everything happens for a reason question is always what do you get out of it. :) thanks for the review man!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

I took my time with this piece and added all my experiences from the last 4 months. And I honestly have to admit I didn't notice how much I got in this $ months in one poem talk about an epic experience :) And I thank you all for reading it!! :) And for those that haven't enjoy!! :)

[Norah]

Sensational and passionate. Absolutely love this poem! Excellent job :D

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thank you lovely :) really appreciate your review :)

[Norah]

my pleasure