Heavenly Bond

This is a story poem About a child that goes through Life. Enjoy :)

Heavenly Bond

 

From the depths of life

A child was born

Kept alone by all his strife

A light was torn

 

His heart slowly became tainted

A lingering soul

Left alone taken by all his hatred

And lost control

 

His world consumed in Darkness

A driven Sadness

Giving in to the madness

A man giving up

 

Until the day he had met her

A saving spirit

Free from the world

And Love was born

Author's Note

Hope you guys enjoy this one its almost close to my lost by pain :) Enjoy!!

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

A quick write of a story...unravels quite fast..
...but that's the point in it...since you write it in a poem...
the beginning the conclusion and the finale...
all grouped into one collective...
and this one has a happy ending...
which is presumed by how it ends...

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Yap :) Thanks again for all your reviews brother I will get back to you as soon as I can :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Rita L. Sev]

I like the form you took with these beautiful sentiments. Nicely done, Carl!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you lovely :)

[Norah]

A profound, poignant, and absolutely wonderful piece of poetry

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Really I had NO Idea! thanks for sharing this wonderful review :) Epicness *

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Great message inside your words! Nice ending, too. :)

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very intesive and interising writing. i like how you put hope on the end . this realy make me happy .