Darker Soul

Darker Soul

 

Doreiku my friend.

From the demons you descent

Fighting to intercept

My gentle soul's threat!

 

From the depths of my soul.

You come seeking Control

Bringing death to any that do harm.

My deepest inner charm!

 

Forging together our brutality.

Enchanting our insanity!

The greatest perfection

For we destroy their infection!

 

Enraged by their lies!

we seek their cries!!

For they bring our lustful

blood lust!!!

Author's Note

This is my first hard poem let me know what you guys think :)
Doreiku stands for Drake he was a evil god hehe to put it slightly

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

If you think your deepest inner charm, is the one to harm, it ain't good luvie. I feel true zombie or vamp love here, dunno why, but there is a real out-breaking balance here, a need to jump out of the regular things, and be profoundly happy with the one you love... desire...

I know Reikon in Japanese stands for soul/ghost, and it seems to have a wordish connection here...
Interesting, tell me if I'm wrong, but that was just my true feeling right away, and I love to give you those unmanipulated ones... xo

- Elisa

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Loved your review!! :) had to write this to brake free from my sorrow,Doreiku is like my evil side :) which I rarely let out. Doreiku stands for Drake he was a underworld god. :) Hehe so you weren't too wrong Hehe and thank you much appropriated :)

Ah I see ;-) thank you for explaining. You are always welcome my friend.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

:) glad to have you as a friend

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Haha and I have to say my deepest inner charm is my strength and will to protect me the soft and open side but when people come and do harm do my people,my friends my loved ones than yes to kill their acts would be my inner charm :) hope you understand that part a little more

Thanks for explaining, yes I do now...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I see you got creative with this write...
even down to the font...
and the usage of exclamation point to draw in your reader...
and the explanation in the author's note -- who this creature is ---

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thanks for reading brother :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[A. Amos]

This one my friend is neatly crafted and your hidden messages are well read, thanks for posting

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you :) and its my pleasure :)

[AYVID N]

Very fascinating! And I loved the rhyming!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thank you for a lovely review :)

[NeiL ArandA]

You have a dreamy side Carl ...

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Haha I take it your a bit violent lover hehe aren't you :)

[Tina Louise UK]

reeeally good, I liked :) x

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thank you for your kindness hehe,I wrote this to take a break from my sad writing :) Haha but sadly it's like readers are skipping it not even seeing it hehe but thanks I appreciate your kind words :)