Addiction

A poem for a special lady friend :)

Addiction

 

Hearts sew in one

Forming patterns of love

Combined to form

A deepest bond

 

The irresistible melody

sorrow and love

turned us together

linking our path

 

As time gets consumed

We must deal with reality

Forgetting the sensation

Of our intense vibration

 

But when one gets lost

Our Addiction screams

Longing the other

For their intense need

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

This is so beautifully written my sweet friend. There is always a close addiction, when two friends, become eachothers besties. They are like magnets, and shall always come back to eachother, is it just to help, to tell a daily story, or just to be there for eachother, this came right out of your heart, I can see, and tell. Thank you so much for sharing. :) Veel liefs, en een heel grote knuffel,

- Elisa

[Carl Drake Barnard]

:) Thank you Eli :) for your kind words :) and may I say what n awesome review ! :D

I must have missed this one, for some reason, you're very welcome sweet friend xo always!

[Roger Turgeon]

Quite a bit different from the poem of the same title you reviewed on my page. Addiction can take many forms....good and bad. Is the emotion stronger when we embrace our addition or when it is denied?

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you for reviewing my poem,I believe my friend it is both Our addiction grows stronger when we embrace it but you only feel the real strong addiction when it is denied to you :)

[A. Amos]

This is one good write, your title itself is amazing.....we all are stuck in some kind of addictions..enjoying reading your work my friend....

[Carl Drake Barnard]

:) Thank you my dear friend for your kind reviews :)

[Tarella]

Hmmmmm....:-)...true words from an honest heart..."But when one gets lost" "our addictions scream."

[Carl Drake Barnard]

thank you ella for your kind review :) much appreciated

[Daydreamer]

I wonder who was the inspiration behind this one..

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe it's a secret ;)

[NeiL ArandA]

I certainly agree with Elisa .... I was intrigue by your Avatar Photo ..So I came and investigate...

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thanks :)

[Kimberly Wolke]

Very well written veiw of something we all face from time to time. Great work!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thanks Kim :)

[Pryde Foltz]

But when one gets lost

Our Addiction screams

Longing the other

For their intense need

I get this write all too much. I wonder is just bio-chemistry, fear of abandonment to something deeper.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

bio chemistry :) and a little something deeper :)

[Tina Louise UK]

Connections are so wonderful aren't they, a beautiful piece :) x

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thank you for your wonderful review :) really enjoyed it hehe :)

[Frieda P]

The best kind of addiction there is, and hopefully there's no cure. Nicely pen'd!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you :)