Memories

~Memories~

The clearest of all moments

from times we share.

Controlled by lovable emotions,

we both couldn't bare.

Alas I still remember

our last moments together.

which I'll cherish forever.

The days of November.

We spent our nights

typing oh so innocently.

Withholding that which had no right

apparently.

So we became friends.

Even then we where so scarce.

For being together was just to intense.

With all our heart's cares.

With the shifting of times

our so called future.

Became nothing more then hindering lines.

Regretted by your very own lecture.

Now memories is all that is left,

reminding me when you were by my side.

For which body and mind has kept,

alive for all this time...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A haunting and beautiful tale in the poem. Some people can leave permanent marks upon us forever. Good description led the reader into good thoughts and places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you Coyote for an enjoyable review glad you saw this and say thanks to the vodka it wrote more lol

[JenniferMarie]

beautiful.

fav lines:

"The days of November.
We spent our nights
typing oh so innocently."

"Now memories is all that is left,
reminding me when you were by my side.
For which body and mind has kept,
alive for all this time..."

It's all very nice, but those were my favorite lines.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

thanks for reviewing glad you got something for yourself :D

[JenniferMarie]

Of course, thank you. :) Happy to read nice poetry.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

As I'm reading I remember I wasn't completely sober,something happened with a special friend and the next day around 3 to 4 in the morning I was wrighting this . So this has shallow and deep meanings hope you enjoy and find part of this in your own way :)