Memories

~Memories~

The clearest of all moments

from times we share.

Controlled by lovable emotions,

we both couldn't bare.

Alas I still remember

our last moments together.

which I'll cherish forever.

The days of November.

We spent our nights

typing oh so innocently.

Withholding that which had no right

apparently.

So we became friends.

Even then we where so scarce.

For being together was just to intense.

With all our heart's cares.

With the shifting of times

our so called future.

Became nothing more then hindering lines.

Regretted by your very own lecture.

Now memories is all that is left,

reminding me when you were by my side.

For which body and mind has kept,

alive for all this time...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A haunting and beautiful tale in the poem. Some people can leave permanent marks upon us forever. Good description led the reader into good thoughts and places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you Coyote for an enjoyable review glad you saw this and say thanks to the vodka it wrote more lol

[Kristina Kerstein]

Great job and thought provoking:)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Aww thank you Kristina :) Ps you have a beautiful name :)

[Tarella]

Just reminded me of the word "zing" from hotel transylvania...they say it only comes once..but I guess we know better,I think.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe we do I learned a lot about it hehe there's even a book abt it :)

[Tarella]

Its filled with deep emotions that most of us can relate to..good job :-)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thank you for your wonderful reviews :)

[NeiL ArandA]

This is indeed awesome writing with a romantic side. I saw some minor typographical error
"For being together was just to (too) intense. "

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Ohh thank you for letting me know my friend :)

[Michelle N. H.]

Your last stanza, in particular, affected me deeply. I adore this piece to its core. You have a golden heart, I can tell.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thank you Michelle :) Means a lot :)

[Michelle N. H.]

You're welcome, Carl :)

[Justsimplyjulia]

wow, i totally swooned. I loved this! A wonderfully fabulous write!
Keep this up!!
-Dragon

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehehe Thanks Dragonheart :)

[Stevo The POE-t]

I have to say bravo man on this write... I love reading a romantic dedication to a woman that you love. I'll say it like this sometimes memories can be a great thing. Other times they can be the worst... But in this write the memories you hold onto are a wonderful delight. You must have really cared about this woman bro... I can relate to this write really vividly and that's why I really like this. It strikes close to home... I wanna see you write more like this man...

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thanks bro!! Means a lot coming from you!! Glad you enjoyed it :)

[Sue Hart]

This piece reminds me of chatting on line and making such good friends as on this post. This tie we have of sharing our writing is a peek into our minds, souls, and hearts. Building forever memories that we will cherish. I really liked it.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe thank you Sue :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

So sweet, romantic, and true to your heart my friend.... I think you outdone yourself with this romantic piece.

I hope the girl sees how precious you are ;) take good care friend.

You write art, pretty well on being not completely sober... I dig it.....

Soentjies en Drukkies ;) lol

- Elisa

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe dig your review!! Thank you!! Kusjes en knuffels!!

Kusjes en knuffels lieverd! :) jij bent goed in onthouden mijn Nederlands!!!! haha

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Bedankt :) Hehe

Graag gedaan :) he he oh I love you understand it....

Nobody in the whole world knows the perfect mix South-Africans and Dutch have, unless they understand the slang..... xD

[Carl Drake Barnard]

lol I have seen a few duch girls here,but they are... What's the word when white girls from there come here for the blacks? Can't rember and they slang!! That's how I know a little

Wooohaha, I am thinking too, about that slang.... lol, witjes? witties? blankies? Northern chics? ha? lol

[Carl Drake Barnard]

no there's a specific word lol

Oh jij vertellen NU! hahahaha

[Carl Drake Barnard]

please enter at least 10 characters,any way lol wat? Hehe jammer wat jy gese? What did you say? :)

ek gesy jij nu vertellen!!! (you must tell me right now hahahaha)

Ek gese, jy nu moet seggen/vertellen? ha? ja? knuffels

[Carl Drake Barnard]

lol can't remember will tell when I find out Hehe

That's cool you do that, sorry, I was away for a while.... hehe

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe its okay I was sleeping that while Hehe