As strong as a rock

The words may seem

strange

But know you'll be

tamed

 

I miss the tender words

that gave me hope and inspiration

For they made me feel like this

the love and admiration

 

I miss the long nights

we wrote together

Taking me to new heights

Even in the cold weather

 

A writer's message

giving truth and admiration

with respect to one's

direction

                                                                                        
strong and pure

always wanting to

hear more

 

A writer's love
as strong as a rock

with her caring

devotion

 

Author's Note

Needed to edit this to :)

Reviews

[Dark Rider]

I really like this poem. It had a nice flow to it, and I loved the story it told. Nicely done. :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Why thank you :) And thanks for reading

[Glen Yumang Manese]

There is an admission in the starting lines...
and the rest of this develops within itself..
...as the words come down the lines...
and that admission carries to the last stanza...

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thanks for reading man :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Annalisa]

Wonderful! I really really enjoyed this, the flow and choice of words were lovely. :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

thanks a lot : )

[Rose Diamond]

I love how the stanzas change, and how it's not all in one style or one format, but yet you manage to make the words flow so beautifully. Very lovely!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you Rosie :)

[TL Boehm]

yes indeed - this is a lovely poem.
A writer's love
as strong as a rock
with her caring
devotion
Beautiful sentiment there

[KaylaScarlett]

enjoyed the word flow. very beautiful.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you :)

[Jvonne]

I like the emotion in this piece. Good flow. Well done!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you Jvonne!! :)

[Catlen]

Nice Work! I like the flow and the images portrayed.

I think you need an apostrophe here: "A writer's message" "A writer's love"

Keep up the good work!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Thank you and you're right :)

[Meliss@k]

The last three stanzas really pulled me in but when I got the the final stanza, I was blown away with how beautifully you tied the entire poem together.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

aww thank you :) glad you liked it :)